I'm glad it worked out for you and I appreciate you posting the letter but in all honesty, (please don't take this personal) it comes off as desperate and dishonest. I'm a real hard sell so maybe it's just me.
I always try to keep communication short and to the point.. But in this case when the buyer countered yet again and expanded on why he wanted it, I gave him some honest advice about traffic and how the domain would be far better for his business than the name he was actually seeking, which was a mispell of a word but was his last name.
I expressed that it's too good of a domain to sell at the price he's offering and I couldn't reduce it anymore, I also indicated I was confident I could get more if I wait it out, By saying all this, it sent signals that I'm not as desperate as he may of thought.
It's also important to show some flexibility so the buyer feels he's getting a good deal, so aside from lowering my price from $5800 to $4500, I offered to split the escrow fee of $283, He soon writes back with DONE!
I think one of the most important things when negotiating a sale is NEVER insult that persons intelligence by lying to them, you can get away with bending the truth a little, but if you take it too far most buyers will know it.. That's what I got from your letter, I didn't believe any of it, hopefully what I wrote here will help to improve on it.
Thanks
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