outofoz32
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Hi all,
This arrived in my domain sales Inbox today, from a landing website that is obviously a Domain Sales site:
[email protected]
Hello,
We are selling the domain name "xxxxxxxxxxxx.com", Would you be interested in buying it?
If so, please submit your offer.
This was my first time being contacted by a fellow outbound. I have a few comments/suggestions to make this a better sales pitch, what do you think?
My first comment would be to research very well what the company is selling. My site is specific to Domain sales.
The second suggestion I have is to not use a gmail, hotmail, yahoo, or any personalized account.
We use: [email protected]
I like the direct approach with sales, so the key point is there, but then it is finished with: "please submit your offer." I wish we could buy a car that way. The close needs to be firm, with a suggested price in my opinion. I would do something like this:
We are selling the domain name "BlockchainChanges.com", Would you be interested in buying it?
The current rate for such a high quality Domain is in the range of medium to high xxxx, but we can help you obtain better sales, and beat out your competition with this memorable Domain by offering you our special winter savings price of low xxxx(original minimum).
This discounted sale will end at the end of the month! (whatever month that is) We firmly believe in passing on the savings to our customers, and will also suggest using an Escrow service of your choosing, in order to maintain the safety, security, and privacy for our transaction.
Thank you for your time.
Domains In Demand
[email protected]
https://sedo.com/search/?member=65b7a79b641c47b9087cc3c6f023f47ecb0969f9
This arrived in my domain sales Inbox today, from a landing website that is obviously a Domain Sales site:
[email protected]
Hello,
We are selling the domain name "xxxxxxxxxxxx.com", Would you be interested in buying it?
If so, please submit your offer.
This was my first time being contacted by a fellow outbound. I have a few comments/suggestions to make this a better sales pitch, what do you think?
My first comment would be to research very well what the company is selling. My site is specific to Domain sales.
The second suggestion I have is to not use a gmail, hotmail, yahoo, or any personalized account.
We use: [email protected]
I like the direct approach with sales, so the key point is there, but then it is finished with: "please submit your offer." I wish we could buy a car that way. The close needs to be firm, with a suggested price in my opinion. I would do something like this:
We are selling the domain name "BlockchainChanges.com", Would you be interested in buying it?
The current rate for such a high quality Domain is in the range of medium to high xxxx, but we can help you obtain better sales, and beat out your competition with this memorable Domain by offering you our special winter savings price of low xxxx(original minimum).
This discounted sale will end at the end of the month! (whatever month that is) We firmly believe in passing on the savings to our customers, and will also suggest using an Escrow service of your choosing, in order to maintain the safety, security, and privacy for our transaction.
Thank you for your time.
Domains In Demand
[email protected]
https://sedo.com/search/?member=65b7a79b641c47b9087cc3c6f023f47ecb0969f9
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