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Well, I wrote a total of 2 poems today (ooh, feeling creative), and decided to share them with everyone on NP.

Winter Death

Christmas time, winter, the snow is falling,
Covering all in a deathly white blanket,
Trees shed their leaves, plants wither and die,
The ground turns hard, no seed can grow,
This deathly wonderland,
So beautiful, but dead.

A lone tree stands, on top of the hill,
Defiant to the last, refusing winter,
Fighting the icy hand of death,
Keeping his leaves, 'till the very last,
Alas! He cannot defeat the winter,
His last few leaves, tumble to the ground.

Ground becomes snow, water becomes ice,
Everything is white, pure, clean,
But dead. White death, how ironic,
White should be clean and holy,
Not deadly and stifling life,
Nature retreats, hibernating 'till spring.

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A Gothic Christmas

It's christmas,
Cold and snowing,
White and pure,
Full of death.

Go inside,
To the party,
All is black,
Purple and red.

Skulls are favourite,
Replacements of baubels,
On the tall dark tree,
With red and purple lights.

Atop the tree,
A skeletal angel,
Wings held high,
Head bowed.

Past the crowd,
Is a table,
Refreshments avaliable,
Take, eat.

Punch too,
Red as blood,
Made from fruit,
So they say.

It's christmas,
Cold and snowing,
Purple, black and red,
A gothic christmas.

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What do you all think?
 
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A little dark, Michael... but well written.
Thanks for sharing. :tu:
 
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I think they're alright.
 
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Nice writing ... different if compared to usual but cool:)
 
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Not too bad at all. Forwarded the Gothic Christmas one to a friend that will love it.
 
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~ Cyberian ~ said:
A little dark, Michael...:
Yup, I was in quite a dark mood yesterday/earlier today.

zoodia said:
Forwarded the Gothic Christmas one to a friend that will love it.
Ooh, Word of Mouth advertising, i'll be famous in no time! lol

Also, I have lots more poems on my website if anyone is interested; http://www.flamingcold.com/
 
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nice...thanks for sharing it with us :)
 
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