Landing page review round #2...

[AlphaToday]

Hey Everybody,

A while back you all provided me with some great feedback on my landing pages which included:

- keeping the contact form and contact information "above the fold"
- adding a BIN button
- trying a new color scheme
- reducing the font size
- not wasting screen space
- ensuring mobile compatibility
- keeping it simple

I've made some updates and I am again requesting your ideas and thoughts. The URLs are below if you have a moment to take a look:

http://CashPacific.com
http://CasasNewYork.com

Your honest, constructive feedback is greatly appreciated :o)

 

[AlphaToday]

Any feedback at all......echo......echo.......echo.......

 

[daica85]

I think you should put the domain directly on the red ribbon instead on the black strip below, this will make the landing page more clearer and focus more on the name. I think so.

 

[AlphaToday]

@daica85

Appreciate the feedback. Thank you.

 

[baseballworld]

One question who is gonna click the donate link below. No one ever donated to a used car salesman why would they a domainer. lol

 

[AlphaToday]

One question who is gonna click the donate link below. No one ever donated to a used car salesman why would they a domainer. lol

Perhaps my website is for more than just selling domains Check out the other pages.

If someone enjoys my content and feels like donating, why would I deny them the opportunity?

 

[baseballworld]

I didn't see content of readability or enjoyment though I saw a online sales pitch that was pretty straight forward. Designed well but first thing came to mind when seeing the donate button is a give a penny take a penny cup at the gas station.

 

[baseballworld]

One thing I do really like is that you listed like a definition or many ways the domain could be used or represented.

 

[AlphaToday]

@baseballworld
Thanks for your feedback.

 

[baseballworld]

Is there a way maybe you could also benefit from affiliate revenues, etc