advice Help me choose the better Landing page of these two...

[LaunchUp.com]

I have a bigger end goal than a landing page, but that goal requires some funds.
So in the meantime I've created two landing pages. Page1 and Page2

• Which landing page you find more effective? Which would you take seriously? which is easier to use? etc...

Thanks for the help!

 

[MasterOfMyDomains]

page 1 is not loading, page 2 loaded good, not to sure on the map idea
Your footer looks fat #2 and set title so something other than home shows in the tab

 

[DaveX]

add the form from page 2 to page 1 and you've got a winner.

 

[kandyan]

Page 1

 

[LaunchUp.com]

page 1 is not loading, page 2 loaded good, not to sure on the map idea
Your footer looks fat #2 and set title so something other than home shows in the tab

Seems to be one of the drawbacks of using shared hosting. Sometimes too much traffic can cause the page not to load. But can't afford more at the moment. Try again and see if u get through this time

 

[MasterOfMyDomains]

I got thru now, I say #1 with a contact form, gotbrands is not responsive, imprvd musa area is a black box on phone. #2 looks good. Through in your phone number maybe, the ease of tap to call could make a difference.
Sites have to be mobile friendly

 

[LaunchUp.com]

I got thru now, I say #1 with a contact form, gotbrands is not responsive, imprvd musa area is a black box on phone. #2 looks good. Through in your phone number maybe, the ease of tap to call could make a difference.
Sites have to be mobile friendly

#1 should be responsive. I just added a contact area,but the email doesn't seem to be going through.
I thought I needed a 800 number to look professional..i have a 347 phone number and im not experience discussing deals over the phone...

 

[frank-germany]

page1 is much better to me

if it would just show more details

 

[hookbox]

Page 2 is not responsive. Whichever style you go with it must be responsive. I like the look of Page 2 with the fade behind the logo. I don't like the tagline on Page 1, Power your Brand and meet the Success. It doesn't sound right. Both pages have a contact form and a inquiry/get in touch button. I think you only need one or the other. I don't like the map but it does have a New York City address which in my opinion helps give the company credibility. Shared hosting is cheap but remember you may only get one shot at someone looking up the name and if the page doesn't load you may lose that one person looking for that one name that one time. Remember brandables don't get tons of traffic so those few hits that you get each month are very important.

 

[Dorkside]

Prefer page 1 as I think it looks more modern.

 

[AJP1987]

yeah page 1 is better imo but the contact form from page 2 could be added to page 1 to make it even better

 

[Recons.Com]

Never understood the choice of black background. It makes the page too heavy.

Also add field for entering the phone.

 

[biggie]

what's the name you're selling?

 

[DomainVP]

#1 Looks great!

Everyone should get off of these platforms that take 30% of your domain sale and have a professional landing page for their own domain names.

Your sales pitch copy feels a bit 'forced' but you can work on that.

 

[LaunchUp.com]

what's the name you're selling?

All my names are pointed there so the buyer inquire on the name they want. I've got one inquiry so far.

 

[LaunchUp.com]

#1 Looks great!

Everyone should get off of these platforms that take 30% of your domain sale and have a professional landing page for their own domain names.

Your sales pitch copy feels a bit 'forced' but you can work on that.

Have any suggestions for a sales pitch?

 

[LaunchUp.com]

yeah page 1 is better imo but the contact form from page 2 could be added to page 1 to make it even better

So you don't like the contact form that's currently on page one?

 

[LaunchUp.com]

Page 2 is not responsive. Whichever style you go with it must be responsive. I like the look of Page 2 with the fade behind the logo. I don't like the tagline on Page 1, Power your Brand and meet the Success. It doesn't sound right. Both pages have a contact form and a inquiry/get in touch button. I think you only need one or the other. I don't like the map but it does have a New York City address which in my opinion helps give the company credibility. Shared hosting is cheap but remember you may only get one shot at someone looking up the name and if the page doesn't load you may lose that one person looking for that one name that one time. Remember brandables don't get tons of traffic so those few hits that you get each month are very important.

Can you suggest a better tagline or reformed tagline for page 1?

Maybe it could be: "Power Your brand" or "The right name matters" etc

 

[LaunchUp.com]

page1 is much better to me

if it would just show more details

What kind of details do you recommend?

 

[LaunchUp.com]

My contact form isn't working...anyone wordpress savvy who can fix this?The emails never arrives?
the form came with the theme, otherwise i'll add a new contact plugin that may not be the best fit fr the site.