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Hey Everyone!
Im a web designer and i have been doing it for about 4 years and i wanted you guys to reveiw my site as it is right now, its still in the process of being made,and i need suggestions, thanks!

Mike



http://kuzumkrafts.starwars3drpg.com/
 
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AfternicAfternic
Hey,

Well it looks good but it's just a little too dark for me.

All the best,

- Sw
 
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StudioWorks said:
Hey,

Well it looks good but it's just a little too dark for me.

All the best,

- Sw

Agree with StudioWorks

Use light colour :wave:
 
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The dark color is ok with me - the only thing I really noticed is the font you are using for your graphical headings (i.e., the one used for Welcome to Kuzum Krafts, et. al.) looks strange when compared to normal text. I found the graphical headings to be distracting. :imho:
 
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Let us know if you make the changes we suggested.

All the best,

- SW
 
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I don't like the way the ayout is put up at all... It looks very unprofessional and very very messy. Nice colors though.
 
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Dark colors are not a bad thing, I'm not big on the way the layout is set up though. I don't like the fact that when i put my mouse over the navigation it all dissappears haha. Than i get lost :S

Good start though.

-Brittany
 
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Whoa..
Your site has some serious organizational problems. On page load I didn't know where to look. Everything is just placed seeminly random. It is too dark for me but that might be your choice.

Your header...I know it suppose to be a reflection but it doesn't look one bit like you got the effect. Think a bit logical...depending on surface...a reflection would be light plus fades off. Lots of tut on how to do it.

Like I said...no organisational structure and so there's no use of white space. Needs lots of work.
 
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Hello mikeyakuza ,

Sorry , But I don't like the layout you made for your personal site..The text and graphics need to be more improved.I suggest you use photoshop to make a layout for the site !

Thanks
Virtua
 
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hey there.

I think your site has some definate potential in the way that it has content and an impact when the user visits the site for the first time.

In the way of website aesthetics, I would say that the link placements would look more efficient if they were on the right or left column and perhaps a smaller, more organised font. You could possible add a textured background and style the lists using CSS to fit in with your theme.

I do like "random image" part, to show that your site is dynamic and therefore provide people with an incentive to come back and see something new.

I'm not sure about having the flash welcome note on the main page. It looks quite cool and has some great and nifty features to it - like minimise etc, however I feel it is quite unnecessary.

The gray boxes are not really in keeping with the curvy nature of your picture fonts, perhaps some borders would look nice and a darker grey.

The "your ad here" must have a link to what you are offering.

Now regarding your code... I think you must validate it either with HTML or XHTML - XHTML being the preferred choice. I only needed to look at the top of your page to see this:

Code:
<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN">
<center><html>
<head>

the "center" tag does not have any effect before the "html" tag, indeed it doesn't have any effect in the html code after the "body" tag.

I would invest in using and giving your layout classes so that you can change them easily.

I would add a Meta description tag in the head as well.

Regards,

William
 
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Thanks for the input everyone, ill look into making changes. But the site was never done, and i shouldnt have posted it that early in its design stages. But thanks anyways.

Mike
 
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It looks alright - I see nothing wrong with Black or Dark colors .... But I do prefer the site/content be Centered in my viewing area though - I might would also lose the Gray areas and Use Black there as well .... with maybe a different font to catch attention to those areas ~
 
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