advice Last sentence in email to end user?

[Igor Mironyuk]

Which last sentence must be in email to end user?

Do you interested in this domain?
Do you want to buy this domain?

or WHAT?

Which is better(I mean not only my written above)?

 

[Domain Galleria]

BUY IT...or else...

...I will twist your neck....funny you

 

[Domain Galleria]

I beg to differ. I'm with @DomainVP on this... any ending along the lines of "Are you interested in this domain name?" smacks a little of... desperation, IMO. Plus, what's ghe point of emailing the prospect at all if you don't end it with a call to action?

I said a well-crafted but not ''are you interested.....

 

[DeliDomains]

I usually end my inbounds with " Looking forward in closing this deal at the earliest... Best Regards?

 

[Domains - Wanted]

I usually end my inbounds with " Looking forward in closing this deal at the earliest... Best Regards?

I'd avoid anything showing this is in any way time sensitive. That smacks of desperation. Ergo, a shrewd buyer can use that to pressure you on the price.

 

[Domain Galleria]

Okay, I'll bite... what do you consider a well crafted question in this case, exactly?

Depends on who your audience is....if you are a domainer, I may put it this way ''do you mind adding this to your portfolio? That sounds more courteous

 

[Domains - Wanted]

This is your last chance to get an attractive domain, before I will offer it to a new customer. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Bluffing might work, on occasion, at poker. In outbound domain sales, not so much. Inbound, even less. That is, unless you are inviting potential buyers to a domain auction underway. Or you substantiate your "threat" by explaining how many other prospects you are communicating with.

 

[Lars Ravn]

Bluffing might work, on occasion, at poker. In outbound domain sales, not so much. Inbound, even less. That is, unless you are inviting potential buyers to a domain auction underway. Or you substantiate your "threat" by explaining how many otger prospects you are communicating with.

This is your chance to get this attractive domain before one of your competitors does. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Does this sound better or?

 

[DrJacoby]

Two things:

1. The dollar sign goes before the numbers (e.g. $9,995).
2. What a ridiculous price for that domain.

 

[Soofi]

I sent 2 emails today. One had 5 views and no response, and another had 34 views and a phone call with a decision maker...

Hopefully they seal the deal tomorrow.

All I can say is that what I do works for me on a regular basis, and I hope that what everyone else is doing works for them.

Cheers.

Would love to see your email draft. Thanks

 

[Kate]

I think you will struggle to sell these names, the problem isn't even the sales pitch. Even the best sales pitch cannot sell domains nobody wants.

 

[Igor Mironyuk]

Please do not write this.

Why?

 

[Hugo_Strange]

Are you interested in this domain?

instead of

Do you interested in this domain?


However...

Don't use either one. You never want to end the eMail with a question, you want to end an eMail with a call to action. How you configure this is up to you.

I just ask them if they want the name. Seems to always get a response. Keep it simple.

I just sold a domain yesterday to an end user using this simple method.

 

[DomainVP]

I just ask them if they want the name. Seems to always get a response. Keep it simple.

Just getting a response is not enough, you have to walk them through a repeatable sequence that gets them to say "YES".

You can keep a message simple, 3-4 short lines, while putting a lot of thought and design to how your craft this simple message.

In professional sales, which is what outbound is, you never end the eMail with a question. You end with a call to action.

 

[Hireinternet]

You might be interested !

 

[DrJacoby]

And that's why most people in the world are garbage at sales.

Do you REALLY know what a call to action is? Most people don't.

HERE
Nail your Cold Email Call To Action: 10 Techniques to Boost your Response Rates

Domaining is full of lazy shortcut takers. You do what makes you happy, but this industry is also full of people that are killing it because they take the time to learn every nuance of marketing and sales.

Directly from a sales professional:



Simply asking someone if they want the name is a weak sales strategy that forces you to spend more money at the point of acquisition in order to acquire domains that sell themselves.

Millions of domains can't sell themselves, so YOU have to. Or be lazy, whatever makes you happy.

Maybe it's because I'm a "lazy shortcut taker", but I believe it's perfectly possible to to keep the email short, include a call to action, and finish with an open ended question.

 

[Igor Mironyuk]

I sent 2 emails today. One had 5 views and no response, and another had 34 views and a phone call with a decision maker...

Hopefully they seal the deal tomorrow.

All I can say is that what I do works for me on a regular basis, and I hope that what everyone else is doing works for them.

Cheers.

How you track views of your emails?

 

[Domain Galleria]

Don't use either one. You never want to end the eMail with a question, you want to end an eMail with a call to action. How you configure this is up to you.

..a well-crafted question will sure attract response from a receiver

 

[Domains - Wanted]

I said a well-crafted but not ''are you interested.....

Okay, I'll bite... what do you consider a well crafted question in this case, exactly?

 

[DeliDomains]

I'd avoid anything showing this is in any way time sensitive. That smacks of desperation. Ergo, a shrewd buyer can use that to pressure you on the price.

Desperation and pressure is for rookies..... your closing follows how strong you opening line is. I usually mean... lets cut all bull, close the deal and get on with our life... Else I take the deal to some else.

 

[Igor Mironyuk]

Streak, a gMail extension that I use in Chrome.

I installed this Add-on but I don't know how see email views. And how to delete this extension too.

 

[Lars Ravn]

you can track the mails under sent

 

[Lars Ravn]

This is your last chance to get an attractive domain, before I will offer it to a new customer. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

 

[Domains - Wanted]

This is your chance to get this attractive domain before one of your competitors does. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Does this sound better or?

Sure does

In fact, I'd add a preceeding paragraph: Terms of sale are first come, first serve...

 

[Lars Ravn]