yesitsavailable.com - landing page review

[Gary Moore]

Hello, I'm looking for constructive criticism on my new landing page for my domains. Any input is appreciated.

Thank you

 

[Gary Moore]

BUMP

 

[DNScholar]

The headings are bit larger.
And your main website should be easily lookable, put it somewhere on top.

 

[DanSanchez]

Looks decent! Some modifications are necessary, not sure if you've seen this on mobile? Make the header text H3 instead of H1 and showcase your domain name there instead of a welcome message.

The left aligned text box below the header needs to be summarized a bit and you must add a highlighted call to action, like bold text or an arrow directing their attention to the right aligned box.

In the middle section, strike the image with the street sign "broadway" entirely and replace it with #34495e (dark gray) or #7f8c8d (lighter gray) for background. Whatever you think contrasts better with your text.

The footer section also should be smaller, including the logo. Reduce by 60% and add relevant contact info in text so they can click it from mobile. Strike background color, replace with #000.

Hope it helps, good luck!

 

[Gary Moore]

@DanSanchez thank you for the detailed insight. I'm not sure how to have it showcase the domain name as it is a simple GD webpage (had an unused one so I built this). But all of my domains for sale are forwarded to it so I'm not sure how to make it populate with the specific name that was used to reach it.
I will definitely look at the other changes.

 

[DanSanchez]

No problem! In that case, I would simply reiterate your landing domain's keywords like this...

Yes!
It's available.
Call now to secure your domain today.

 

[bigbagofbricks]

You could use php to grab info from the url and then the other pages redirect to yesitsavailable.com/helloworld.com etc.

 

[Gary Moore]

You could use php to grab info from the url and then the other pages redirect to yesitsavailable.com/helloworld.com etc.

I'm not this advanced, sorry. This was built in GD webbuilder so not sure if I could even do that. I do use WP but just getting the hang of it.

 

[Gary Moore]

No problem! In that case, I would simply reiterate your landing domain's keywords like this...

Yes!
It's available.
Call now to secure your domain today.

I did several of the updates, any chance you could take another look and see if it's better?