Wrote a poem - Bored in English class. Would love some feedback.

[user-7256]

Hi all,

Poem is here:

http://www.TheTrueUSA.info

feedback appreciated. Thanks,
-Matt

 

[gchick]

lol that's long....cant make a poem like tht

 

[Eric]

lol, Get bored in English class, what else you going to do? Write a poem! That's it :p lol, not too bad.

 

[domain.addict]

lol that's long....cant make a poem like tht

Lol funny comment. Poems don't necessarily have to be small lol.

 

[Zeeble]

Hi all,

Poem is here:

http://www.TheTrueUSA.info

feedback appreciated. Thanks,
-Matt

Very, very good. Nice creative way of expressing your views. Not sure that I agree with them. However, that is neither here nor there, in this thread. The poem is very good.

 

[spy69]

Nice work man. Good Poem!

Spy

 

[user-7256]

Thanks