review my first site

[onlyme1]

thestorychain.com

if anyone has the time to have a look feedback would be appreciated!

 

[steitiyeh]

sorrry but i think it needs a total redesign... font cant be read, colors are so bright, new proffesional logo needed... the concept is cool, i like it but it should be applied well...

please let us know if u get a newer version ready

good luck


Firas

 

[Niek]

As far is I know , and heared , pixelfonts are outdated.
Im not really a big fan of the site , just becauze of the colors.
Hate the green , and the green does not go together very well with the light grey.

 

[Mike]

Agreed. instead of picking on the things that don't work, and pinpointing the ones that do, the easy summary is truly: toss it out and start from scratch.
It's a valid effort for your first project, but you could have saved a lot of time by using an existing CMS such as Joomla or Wordpress and chosen a more appropriate design.

M.

 

[erikm]

Wow, that reminds me of when I first started web design :O Those designs are out of date these days.