Hi mates! I'm sending some e-mails to potential buyers. Currently I'm using a template that I have created while making some adjustments depending on the receiving end but mainly it has the same closing. I'm thinking of changing it because it might be interpreted as offensive.
#1/ Current closing:
"In case you feel that this domain might be beneficial for your business, kindly reply to this e-mail in order to move on to the next step."
#2/ Another closing which I am thinking of using from now on:
"Tons of benefits your business will gain just by acquiring <<domain I'm trying to sell>>.
I'm happy to share with you some of those benefits. In case you are willing to listen, kindly reply to this e-mail."
So these are 2 versions of outbound e-mail closings. Which one do you prefer to receive if you were the receiving end? Opinions and other suggestions are welcome.
#1/ Current closing:
"In case you feel that this domain might be beneficial for your business, kindly reply to this e-mail in order to move on to the next step."
#2/ Another closing which I am thinking of using from now on:
"Tons of benefits your business will gain just by acquiring <<domain I'm trying to sell>>.
I'm happy to share with you some of those benefits. In case you are willing to listen, kindly reply to this e-mail."
So these are 2 versions of outbound e-mail closings. Which one do you prefer to receive if you were the receiving end? Opinions and other suggestions are welcome.