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Hello guys,

Could you please check the text below? Is it ok? And how could I say "Best regards" or "Regards"?

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Bonjour,
Je m'appele ..........., proprietaire du web domaine: .............
Je propose le domaine "pour vente".
Si votre organisation prend interet а acquerir сe domaine, n'hesitez pas de me contacter.

(My name )

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Thank you in advance!
Nick
 
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Hello guys,

Could you please check the text below? Is it ok? And how could I say "Best regards" or "Regards"?

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Bonjour,
Je m'appele ..........., proprietaire du web domaine: .............
Je propose le domaine "pour vente".
Si votre organisation prend interet а acquerir сe domaine, n'hesitez pas de me contacter.

(My name )

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Thank you in advance!
Nick


According to google translate;

Hello,
My name ..........., owner of the web domain: .............
I propose the field "for sale".
If your organization is interested а acquire сe area, do not hesitate to contact me
 
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According to google translate;

Hello,
My name ..........., owner of the web domain: .............
I propose the field "for sale".
If your organization is interested а acquire сe area, do not hesitate to contact me

:) Thanks. Originally it was written by my friend, who I think know the language, but it was 1.5 years ago and I never used that template - now is the time, so I want to check it :)


Does it sounds OK to enduser?
 
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I would do it so (my mother language: French :) )

Bonjour,

Je m'appelle ..........., et suis propriétaire du nom de domaine "your domain name"
Je propose le domaine "pour vente". <- I would delete that sentence as it is obvious in the next one.
Si vous souhaitez vous porter acquéreur de сe nom de domaine, n'hesitez pas à me contacter.

(My name)
 
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I would do it so (my mother language: French :) )

Bonjour,

Je m'appelle ..........., et suis propriétaire du nom de domaine "your domain name"
Je propose le domaine "pour vente". <- I would delete that sentence as it is obvious in the next one.
Si vous souhaitez vous porter acquéreur de сe nom de domaine, n'hesitez pas à me contacter.

(My name)

Thank you much! :) and repped
Will use it now.

Nick
 
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BTW
Maybe it would be useful to create a sticky thread „How to find Endusers for .tv’s”.
We’ll post there templates in different languages (it’s important to write in an Endusers’s language IMO), we could discuss pricing, strategies etc.
What do you think?
 
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BTW
Maybe it would be useful to create a sticky thread „How to find Endusers for .tv’s”.
We’ll post there templates in different languages (it’s important to write in an Endusers’s language IMO), we could discuss pricing, strategies etc.
What do you think?



A few of the things that I do is avoid the use of batching or sending my email to scores of addresses at once. I send to potential clients individually. I also never use links, ie. I would put down, for example, sedo.com instead of Sedo - The world's leading domain marketplace*-*Sedo.com. If the potential enduser is interested in my product he or she will know how to type in the web site.

I do these in an attempt to avoid some filters barring my email from getting through. Not a guarantee but enhances the odds of your message getting read.

If feasible, go for the person responsible for marketing or product development. Sometimes that is not achieveable, so go for the line:

Please direct this information to the appropriate department, thank you.

then your message - I give them the email as simple information for their company or their clients or customers.

I was surprised at the responses I received by people in higher positions(like pres and vp)telling me they got the email and have indeed sent it to the department they deemed may be interested. A few even gave me the email address of the person so I could send the email there. The response sends me acknowledgement that not only was it read, but others would have the opportunity to read it as well.

It takes time but the way I look at it at least the word is out and if they put some thought into it, they can visualize the benefits of the acquisition for their company.

A sample letter that I am using right now is more of an information sheet regarding the sedo premium auction. The domain name(s) I am selling is displayed prominently in the letter but also the possibility of getting them familiar with the sedo concept doesn't hurt in the long run, as exposure is the key here.

Best of luck and fortune to all here!

Anyway, here is a sample letter:



If you or one or more of your clients are planning to create a presence on the internet, there are a number of domain names at Sedo.com presently up for auction that you may be considering, including:

- -- - - Your domain names here- - - - -

These and other .tv names are available exclusively at Sedo.com

This "general" auction rides on the tails of the Sedo premium .tv auction set for April 1-8, 2010. The sedo premium .tv auction inventory includes 115 of the most sought after .tv names, for the first time available with greatly reduced, standard renewal rates. Feel free to check them and all available .tv names there. There may be one that is what you have waited to find, and now at a normal registration fee per year, worth the wait. Just think about the marketing potential if one company owned a domain name in an extension(.tv) that the viewer is comfortable with.

Yes, the .tv extension is now running at normal yearly registration fees and that opens up an avenue of opportunity for the fortunate endusers with the .tv extension after their domain name.

If you see any name that your company can use, Sedo.com is the address where you have the opportunity to purchase it.

Thank you for your kind attention to this offer.


Sincerely,
 
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Wow! Great post and tips thank you! :)

Agree with you about the links. I don’t put any links at all, but one of friends of mine put the direct link to his domain at Sedo (and was almost banned by Sedo) – cause the Enduser informed his domain Registrar and Sedo about the spam.
At the other side – the idea with telling the Enduser that he can purchase the domain at Sedo is OK, cause we could put at the Sedo the High price and when the Enduser will ask us what is the price – we will tell him the lower price (sometimes it works for me).

But, as I told, I don’t use links in my e-mails. I don’t do it because generally all domains are parked at Sedo, so if Enduser is interested he could type my domain name in browser and find that it is for sale at Sedo.

I use very simple template (the same like this French one):

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Dear ...............,


My name is ....................., the owner of the domain name .....................

I'm currently offering this domain name “for sale”.

If your Company is interested in acquiring this domain please feel free to contact me.

Kind regards,

My name
My e-mail
my www
my telephone number
My photo :) (This is a joke)

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Now I will use also this “Please direct this information to the appropriate department, thank you.”

I was also thinking, should I put any information about .tv generally, for example: what is .tv, why he need to buy it, etc.
Never composed any nice text – and don’t know really if there is a need to do it.
 
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I was also thinking, should I put any information about .tv generally, for example: what is .tv, why he need to buy it, etc.
Never composed any nice text – and don’t know really if there is a need to do it.

I do think that you have to determine whom you are reaching out to. I have dropped that fanfare because the extension of course speaks for itself.

Notice in my letter I only refer to .tv as a benefit thusly:
"Just think about the marketing potential if one company owned a domain name in an extension(.tv) that the viewer is comfortable with. " That's about all I really need to say. Gets the attention to the endusers and they all, with extremely few exceptions, know the term "tv", and now they know it is a valid extension like .com, .net and any others they have seen and heard about.
 
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Hello Nick,
I'm french, and I agree with Lambda (salut P., heureux de te relire!!!)

And how could I say "Best regards" or "Regards"?

"Best regards", or "Regards" is "Cordialement"

So:
"blablabla(...)
Cordialement,
<your name/society>"

Hope it help, good luck!
 
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Hello Nick,
I'm french, and I agree with Lambda (salut P., heureux de te relire!!!)



"Best regards", or "Regards" is "Cordialement"

So:
"blablabla(...)
Cordialement,
<your name/society>"

Hope it help, good luck!


Merci beaucoup :)

Cordialement,
Nicolas
 
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