question Most Motivational Line in your Sales Pitch

[SheikhOvais]

In your experience, what is the most "motivational line" in your sales email that you think has the potential to highly attract the buyer to the domain you are pitching?

What is it for:

1. Generic domains (example: BuyWatches dot com)
2. Brandable domains (example: SpeakPlus dot com)
3. Geo domains (example: TexasDental dot com)


I am of course referring to domains that are relevant and valuable for end users. No pigeon sh*t.

 

[baseballworld]

The most motivational line in an email is the subject to get the to open it in the first place and not send it to spam or the trash folder. lol

 

[Fancy.domains]

I try to NOT be that motivational. In most cases people are interested in a name, or not at all. It's all about their needs, not my empty phrases, so I try to be short and direct:

Hello,

I am the owner of the domain name: bbb .com and I have decided to sell it. I understand that your company is using bbb .net and I just want to ask if you are interested in the more popular .com version?

If you are, please let me know. If not, sorry for bothering you. I will NOT send the same request twice.

Best Regards,

 

[baseballworld]

I try to NOT be that motivational. In most cases people are interested in a name, or not at all. It's all about their needs, not my empty phrases, so I try to be short and direct:

Hello,

I am the owner of the domain name: bbb .com and I have decided to sell it. I understand that your company is using bbb .net and I just want to ask if you are interested in the more popular .com version?

If you are, please let me know. If not, sorry for bothering you. I will NOT send the same request twice.

Best Regards,

Every time I register new domains I get those types of emails and website design emails. I will say a catchy one will even make me atleast read it.

 

[Fancy.domains]

Every time I register new domains I get those types of emails and website design emails. I will say a catchy one will even make me atleast read it.

I get them as well. I do not often send these myself either, but sometimes when I'm able to drop catch a good .COM, I might try if there is someone using a less popular extension. It's works rather well. Even the average Joe knows the power of .COM.

Before I tried with other extensions, but I rarely got a reply.

 

[Kate]

The most "motivational line" is in fact a single keyword: the actual domain name.

 

[Fancy.domains]

The most "motivational line" is in fact a single keyword: the actual domain name.

You said it better than me...

 

[WhoaDomain.com]

here's my favorite.! since I'm from the NYC area. always see these discount "refurbished" electronic stores with the signs like.


Going Out of Business Sale!
or
Fire Sale!
or
Liquidation Sale Limited Time Offer within the next 48 hours only!
or
A Sacrifice @ $XXX.
or
Lost Our Lease Sale!
or
Eviction Sale! EVERYTHING MUST GO! Our Loss is your GAIN!
At These Prices we're Practically Giving them away!

YET somehow they have never left!

or
50% discount! Was $10,000! now Buy Now only $4,999! or if you like offer $100 to activate an Auction and try your luck! You never know! you might snag this $10,000 for only $100! SHAMAZING (oh and I did check. Shamazing.com is taken! lol!)

Act NOW! Before it's Too late!
These prices WON'T LAST!

This domain is for sale. DEADLINE to make your BID is X/X/XXX. hurry before a competitor steals this.

Steal This domain or your competitor will!

USE Coupon Code RGTWW and get 50% off!

Counteroffer WANTED.
Current offer on XXXX.com is $15,842 a care to make a counter offer?


Do you want to be easily Found online?
Do you want to have an IMMEDIATE ADVANTAGE online? Domains are the KEY.
With a ONE TIME PURCHASE you can Say BYE BYE to paying Google for advertising your business and (depending on the quality of the domain) you can SAVE YOUR BUSINESS Hundreds if not MILLIONS in Advertising Costs Year after year.

How much is that PEACE OF MIND WORTH to you and your business knowing you own a MARKETING TOOL that is working to get you new customers 24 hours a days 7 days a week 365 days a year the doesn't need sleep or lunch breaks or a raise? It's simple flooding your website with eager customers with their wallets open just itching to hand over their money?

lol
ok ok sorry went over board here lol I'll stop now.

Too much? lol


At the end I just want someone to bid for my NO RESERVE domains so I can push their offer and turn it into an actual Auction.

 

[Bram C.]

The most "motivational line" is in fact a single keyword: the actual domain name.

And what if your domain consists of 2 (or more) keywords?

But I agree 100% with "The most "motivational line" is in fact the actual domain name"

 

[bluebox]

Buyer - "Why should I pay $xxx+ for this reg fee domain"

That's the best I can come up with

 

[Name Trader]

The price is going up in the next month, if I don't get any offers

 

[xaster]

If you are targeted end users, who you know will benefit from the domain, the favourite line I use is:

By owning this domain name, your competition doesn’t! But, the benefits don’t stop there.