Logo Revison! $20

[Uncoveredmarketing]

I have a logo here.....Its called: Gill Enterprizz....I want it to look sort of the same just more professional. That is a crown on top of the i.

OR If you have your own creative design you can implement that too....

Colour Scheme: BLACK AND WHITE

Must have some sort of CROWN!

Prize: $20

Deadline: October 11th

I look forward to your entries!

 

[J-MAN]

Here are a few variations. The bottom of the crown is supposed to look like an abstract G, I tried to make it stand out a bit more.
Regardz

 

[Uncoveredmarketing]

tyson- the logo is too plain... and i thought the crown wud look better on the g.. but it doesnt... i prefer it on the i instead...

cat- the main focus is the gill and the enterprizz takes away from it.. but the twinkle is something differnt

JMAN- your abstract g with crown... continue the gill so add "ill" in cursive writingg.. dun put the enterprizz

 

[Waardii]

 

[J-MAN]

Something like this?

 

[nguyen_huy_hai]

This are mine, thanks!

 

[Uncoveredmarketing]

waardii- not what im looking for... it doesnt have that nice professional polish.. looks plain
J-man- mmmmm it looked much better in my head....
nguyen- looks to plain...nuttin sticks out...I no longer want the crown on the g...

 

[magi]

Here are my attempts:

Image #1:

Image #2:

Feedback is appreciated. Thanks

 

[Uncoveredmarketing]

magi - looks a bit to sketchyy.... it lacks that bold feeling


Your logo has made me want to emphasize the crown more...

LETS ALL BUILD AROUND THE KING CROWN

 

[magi]

Thanks for the feedback. So just to clarify, you love the crown but the font needs work right? Also, do you prefer the crown on the G or on the I and is the font of image #2 bold enough or are you referring to the EnTerPriZz font? Thanks!

 

[Uncoveredmarketing]

magi- yes font needs work... i wud prefer the crown on the entire image or the "i"... and by bold i mean... not like all black font sticking right in front of you but like stick out a bit... lets build around the image... so lets have the crown stick out the most

 

[magi]

Hi, here is a revision of image #2. hope you like it!

Image #3:

 

[Uncoveredmarketing]

Theres no flow or structure... its just three things put together.... doesnt look like a logo

 

[tysonjb]

My Revisions...

FEEDBACK IS APPRECIATED

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[J-MAN]

Variation of my earlier concept:

 

[Catfish]

Not what the CH wanted.

 

[Uncoveredmarketing]

tyson - the second concept the "g" looks alrite but the crown doesnt blend in at all....
j-man- your abstract of the g looks nice but it just doesnt go with gill enterprizz
catfish - very impressed with the "g and e mixture".. if you can professionally get the words gill enterprizz somewhere in there like what you did at the bottom left .. that would be great

 

[Catfish]

"if you can professionally get the words gill enterprizz somewhere in there like what you did at the bottom left .. that would be great"

UCM - If you could further elaborate on what you deem professional that would be of great help.

 

[Catfish]

Not what the CH wanted.

 

[Uncoveredmarketing]

Ok I have changed my mind for the FINAL time..... If someone can make something like what Waardii did in the begining of the thread....

just make the crown more detailed.. and make it a bit more compact

Thanks

 

[magi]

Hi,

here are some variations of the logo:

Image #1:

Image #2:

Image #3:

Image #4:

Image #5:

Image #6:

Image #7:

Image #8:

Feedback is appreciated.

Thanks