I have been using this letter for these two domain names and sent over 150 of them to lenders, mortage brokers and banking institutions. Not a single response. I could use some constructive criticism. How do I fix this letter?
My current thinking is - the domain names are a lot crappier than I thought.
โShopMortgageRate.comโ โ Inquiry.
I am the Registrant and Administrative contact for:
www.ShopMortgageRate.com
www.USALoanYes.com
My research indicates these web names may be relevant to your companiesโ online competitiveness.
Many sound reasons to purchase a new domain name include โ but are not limited too:
โข Expanding your business from a regional base.
โข Reducing your PPC costs by owning industry relevant search terms.
โข Preventing a competitor from owning keyword rich web names.
โข Redirecting traffic to your own website.
Please accept my apologies for not knowing enough about your corporate structure to specify an individual responsible for acquiring new business opportunities. If you are not that person, please pass this opportunity on.
In these difficult economic times, the ability to redirect traffic from these existing web names to your own homepage may have a substantial impact on your bottom line.
Regards,
Chris Stephenson
www.DtagrsDomains.com
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