FrogShock Studios - Finally here!

[will7]

OK, I finally finished my company site! It's on temporary hosting at the minute (on my friend's account, so no ads, don't worry ). Any reviews and comments are welcome.

Also, if you have anything to say about the content (professional sounding etc.) then I'd love to hear them.

http://will7.b5f3.co.uk

Looking forward to hearing your reviews. And if you could give me a rating out of 5, that'd be great!

 

[Rowan W]

3/5

It lacks anything to capture ones attention, in other words it needs colour and graphcis badly. It's as interesting as stairing at my desktop.

The text is quite boring too, well actually I didn't read it but it doesn't look very intersting, images would solve that problem.

One other thing I notice is that you've used images for the navigation, why? Just use normal text with a rollover colour.

btw, it actually reminds me of my website.

Rowan

 

[{insert name here}]

I like it, I don't think you "need" to add graphics.

Its clean, fast and user friendly, just like you stated on the front page.

Although on your Company page, :

With over 5 years of experience in the field, Will can be found getting "stuck in" on every project we undertake.

I think you should re-word the "stuck in" part! Might give people the wrong impression.

Service page:

FrogShock understand what has to go into a website to make 'a success'. We willl not just build you a site, put it online, and done. We take it one step further. Your solution can be adjusted and adapted until it suits your needs entirely.

Things to look at:
FrogShock understand.... -> Here at FrogShock we understand
to make 'a success'. -> to make it 'a success'. -> to make 'a successfull website'.
We willl -> drop the third "l"
and done. -> and then be done with it. -> and then call it good.

We are professionals and we know what we're doing - give yourself a head start on the web, let FrogShock build you a complete solution!

add a "," after porfessionals
drop the "and we know what we're doing" - makes it sound like you don't
add -> and we only deliver professional work.
drop the "-", and add a "." after sentance, and add "So" to start of the next sentance. (would read -> We are Professionals, and we only deliver Professional work. So give yourself a head start on the web,)
Then add 'and' in between "web, let" (now reads -> We are Professionals, and we only deliver Professional work. So give yourself a head start on the web, and let FrogShock build you a ......)


I hope that is okay that I critiqued your site so much. I was board, and I hope it helps.

Also I really like the site, its good. I also like the second site on your portfolio! Nice job on that. But the first has some issues I can see. Just wondering if that site is done yet?

:wave:

 

[will7]

Thanks for the reviews. About the first site, yeah, it is done, and I'm not that happy with it, but the client was well happy with it - and that's what matters. Once again, thanks, and I too feel it needs some more graphical work. I'll add that later!

And also Rowan, I cannot see any resemblance to your site whatsoever, sorry lol!

 

[HabboRadio.us]

Colors are good, but i like the way you used the greayscale it makes it more fun!