advice Customised Landing Pages

[DanBingham]

Hi all,

I am thinking of designing custom landing pages for all of our premium domains, and have come up with the following as an example - http://danpbingham.wixsite.com/drone

Do you think this could work, or should I just leave the parked on the Bodis platform?

Any feedback would be appreciated.

DD

 

[mr-x]

Video is distracting. Background color / foreground color contrast is painful. I have to strain my eyes to read the text and not watch everything going on.

*not an LP expert.

 

[DanBingham]

Thanks - amended this now as a static image page.

 

[zorbee]

Now it is perfect.

 

[baseballworld]

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