Could you review my website please?

[Marty Rogers]

check it out here

I added this new layout a few days ago now. I was wondering what you thought about it... likes/dislikes. What are your first thoughts as a visitor when you land on my website, what do you notice first and is it easy for you to get to things on the website?

Also, do you think my ads are in good positions? or would you change them to somewhere else (that you think would work better) if this was your website?

Thanks

 

[Keral_Patel]

Well it needs some spicing up. In colors i think.

Plus the right hand side google ads have green URL's. You can blend that in same color as of your sites.

 

[antman]

Website Design Review
Site: MySpace Layouts, MySpace Backgrounds, MySpace Generators, MySpace Codes
Domain: http://www.fun4free.co.uk/

All Ratings are out of 10...

Appearance and Design - 6
Navigation and Accessibility - 8
Activity, Popularity and Marketing - 8
Originality - 6
Loading Times - 7
Quality of Content - 7
Features and Interactivity - 7
Visitor Rating - 6

Overall Rating - 7

Detailed Analysis

I was expecting an arcade site when I saw your domain, but obviously I was mistaken - which is a good thing because you have got yourself a great domain. I suggest a more exciting theme for your website. The layout with the CSS is great, but I feel it lacks the colour and images. MySpace is aimed at the teen age range, and they like exciting and bright colours (apparently). You've put together an odd range of colours together. I would suggest blue and green or something like that.

Your logo needs a bit of work, again, just to spice it up (PM me if you need one). Your navigation is great. Easy to see links and no popups. They are also catergorised correctly. I would only suggest moving the very important links such as Contact Us to the right menu, for more exposure.

The main page needs a bit of more content to interest visitors. Most importantly, you need the images. Even a preview of your best videos would do the job. Make sure however, not to flood the front page with infomation as this slows down the page which many MySpace resource sites have. Your small text link at the top should all be transparent. Your 'Ads by Google' bit has a white background. You might want to change it to blue.

You might want to run over the site for spelling mistakes too. On your Layouts page, there was "suites you." Additionally, try adding titles that suit each page onto the <title></title> tags in the HTML so search engines pick up your content.

Your games section needs to be placed into catergories. It took quite a bit of time to load. You might want to also consider a drop down menu of all your games.

The website has a good amount of traffic, good layout and wonderful content. Just needs a few fixes and this should see a very successful site. Good luck.

Review by Anthony Lieu. Your site was accessed on a ADSL T1 connection, on Mozilla Firefox with a screen resolution of 1280x1024. Thank you for allowing me to review your website design - I hope it was useful.

 

[Janine]

Site: Fun4Free.co.uk

Up's
» Nice Traffic.

Down's
» as Nick said on the other review, You need to change the color.
» Why is it Myspace Codes when your site is Fun4Free.co.uk ?
» Try ' removing ' one of the Google Ads, because your site really is slow.
» Advertise, Try having more Images for your site. To attract some visitors.


Thank You,
- Janine