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Clothing brand logo design- $55 prize!

Labeled as REQ-LOGO in Design Contests started by Rory Ivey, Dec 2, 2018.

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  1. Rory Ivey

    Rory Ivey Active Member VIP

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    Hello I'm looking to start a clothing brand called : Tallawah

    The website url will be at : TallawahApparel.com

    Logo can have just the word tallawah or both(tallawah apparel) with Tallawah being the main feature.

    Tallawah
    is a patois (Jamaican dialect) word meaning "strong, fearless, and not to be underestimated".

    I'd love a logo that just captures this brand. A design i can even throw on a Tshirt.
    I will attach some concepts i found around the web. However, I love original work only...
    I don't want anything from stock websites etc...


    Prize: $55
    Duration: Contest Ends Saturday (December 8) at 8pm.

    If no designs or good then contest will be extended 2-3 days. But I have always found a winning design on namepros so lets do this!!! talla 8.png talla2.png

    Remember I love original designs so don't be limited by these examples...these are just for inspiration.

    Cheers.
     

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    Thanks for your submission. Though it's a nice logo, it's a common design template i can get off creative market or something. It's a clothing brand so it has to be custom/unique.

    hope to see your other ideas!
     
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    Thanks, but this reminds me of the coco cola logo design and it also has that common tale below the text that mentioned in your other design. thnx
     
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    Thanks, this is not a bad start, but I feel it can be much better. I know you can do better concepts. I like that you look for ways to be different and creative/original.

    Also, though the name is rooted from Jamaica, I don't necessarily need or want jamaican colors.
    The brand is more focused on the meaning rather than the word origin.
     
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    Hello,
    Here is my first entry. Let me know what you think.
    Tallawah.jpg
     
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    Not bad, but that T design gives me a common feel.
    And if you do a depict a person it has to show strength or something...

    I'd love to see your other ideas!!
     
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    Thank you for the quick reply.
    Here is my second concept. I have created a minimalistic lion which represents strenght and fearless.
    Tallawah-2.jpg
     
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    I like where you are going with this and how you're thinking.

    I love lions, But the first thing that came to mind was "Superman".. and the one with the red eyes, give a transformer vibes.
    Probably because superman logo has the same shaped ring.

    I have to be able to see the logo as a brand and picture it on a shopify website along with a tshirt ...

    Thanks for being so fast also with the designs.
     
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    Here's another logo i like... tall7.jpg

    Probably because it doesn't look like everything else out there....
    It can look toyish if it's not done right but It's unique and full of life #vibrant.
     
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    Thanks for the fast design!!!

    Colorful but i don't think it's on the same level as the one i shared, which had areas of color and transparency. It's tricky to pull off without it looking too kiddish.

    Here's another logo with color, but It had depth and maturity along with the vibrancy and strength. talla 8.png It would be cool to pull off the logo with the letters in TALLAWAH? I like this because anyone can paste a shape in photoshop and type a letter on each shape. But the way this looks...the designer was 100% custom. And I love the colors used from the Logo. I may even get a melanin logo in the future.
     
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    Really appreciate the design Kraman,

    But the "T" reminds me of a bolt or something unrelated. While the other font/text looks normal.

    Please share any other concepts you have and see examples i gave, including most recent.

    I'll keep an eye out.

    Thnx
     
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    Thanks, but not feeling either of these.
    The first one here is a little better in quality. But I'm not feeling the "T" and the color combination doesn't seem to fit. I'd prefer a color combo like this

    talla 8.png

    You got to ask: Would you wear that on a Tshirt?
    Would millions of people wear that look on a Tshirt?

    The design has to match this logo in style or a totally different concept.
     
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    It's definitely an improvement, but it can be developed more or improved upon.

    1. The "T" still bothers me a little (Just looks weird)
    2. Maybe squared corners like the example would be better
    3. the A's look like taco's or something else. A can be like example.
    4. The L's are just ok, with equaL height and width(usually shorter)

    Feel free to share a new concept if you want to.

    Thanks
     
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    Thanks!

    This is among the best so far!

    1. I think it could use a slight space between the letters like in the example.
    2. The Yellow needs some richness, like in the example. Their yellow is almost like a mustard like.
    3. Also, I'd like to see how it would look if the letters were a little thicker
    4. I like that your design is thoughtful with the bow tie. I'm wondering a bit if that will work since this is about tshirts. But it may.

    Also along with this edit... feel free to share any other concepts.

    Appreciate the submissions!
     
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    Thank you for the feedback.
    I made 3 versions. The first has more spacing. The second I changed the "bow tie". The third has some slight changes to be more unique and has more thickness.
    Tallawah-5.jpg
     
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    Nice work!

    Out of the 3, I like the 3rd one a little better.

    1. I think The bottom portion of the L's look too off. So just keep it one color. So for the first L the whole bottom would retain the redish color and the second would would stay yellow.

    2. Or you can keep the L's like the first and second logo, but but retain the thickness of the third one.

    lastly, after the edits above... make a seond duplicate of the logo with the triangle at the bottom of the T changed to red. Just wanted to see how it would look...
     

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