[Logo] Review.

The-YoungLat

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• Jan 19, 2006

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i suggest you put an 1px black out line to the REDPAW and align the words under ir

Regards,
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• Jan 19, 2006

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v. nice! i didn't know paws have the dip in the bottom though...

 

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Downie

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• Jan 19, 2006

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It has a dip in it so it looks more like a A then a O if you get me with out spoiling the design.

 

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• Jan 19, 2006

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The-YoungLat said:

i suggest you put an 1px black out line to the REDPAW and align the words under ir

Regards,
-Nata

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what i think, but with a 1px gradient stroke with a low opacity or something

may look a bit better, but other than that i really like it, GJ.

 

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Downie

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• Jan 19, 2006

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V2. Not feeling the stroke.

 

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• Jan 19, 2006

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i like it, looks better now me thinks.

 

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• Jan 24, 2006

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Looks pretty decent, not much going on though. It looks professional.

 

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• Jan 24, 2006

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It looks OK, but not the best, to be honest (sorry ).

The slogan text, I find, is quite hard to read, it looks like "Creace" not "Create" which I assume it is meant to say.

I also do not like the way the paw has a small bump in the bottom, I know you say it needs to look more like an "A" but if you have to change the look of a symbol to make it work then it is not an effective logo.

Also, is the design vector (I'm guessing no as, to me, it looks like a Photoshop design)? If not, then make it vector. Trust me, in the long run, vector will be beneficial to you.

Finally, I cannot help but feel that you need an identifying symbol through which people can relate to you and your work, not just a paw in placement of a letter ...

I apologise if you feel I am being harsh towards you, but I am merely giving my honest opinion.

Hope I helped,

Will.

 

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• Jan 24, 2006

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that looks cool i like it

 

MichaelV.

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• Jan 24, 2006

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The-YoungLat said:

i suggest you put an 1px black out line to the REDPAW and align the words under ir

Regards,
-Nata

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if your outline was darker, it would look better imo

 

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• Jan 24, 2006

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I'd take out the dip in the paw...It doesn't really look like an 'A' with the dip, and everyone will know what is says anyway

 

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• Jan 24, 2006

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will thanks. I did not take it that way this is what i wanted. I made it in fireworks with the vector tools. did not use photoshop for this.
I will go back to the drawing board.

 

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• Jan 25, 2006

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Glad I could help you out. I would recommend, however, using a complete vector design program. Fireworks is OK, but it is not fully vector and I never really feel that it produces crisp or clean creations.

Maybe something like Macromedia Flash, Adobe Illustrator or Macromedia Freehand would be worth investing in?

 

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Downie

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• Jan 25, 2006

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I am learning flash at the moment then action scripting. Then i will go on to illustrator i think.

 

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• Jan 25, 2006

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hey what about thin stroke?