Hi all!
I'm doing outbound for a while now and I had a lot of success with it, but I want to improve the text I'm sending to companies as I think what I send them is far from good.
This is what I send to companies:
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Hi,
I own the domain X and I have decided to put it up for sale and I thought you may be interested in acquiring it as this domain can be a great addition to your business.
If you are, please visit the domain X and make an offer through the landing page and we will go from there.
Sincerely,
Yair
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I know there is a lot of room for improvement, hence I created this thread.
Any advice?
Thank you!
I'm doing outbound for a while now and I had a lot of success with it, but I want to improve the text I'm sending to companies as I think what I send them is far from good.
This is what I send to companies:
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Hi,
I own the domain X and I have decided to put it up for sale and I thought you may be interested in acquiring it as this domain can be a great addition to your business.
If you are, please visit the domain X and make an offer through the landing page and we will go from there.
Sincerely,
Yair
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I know there is a lot of room for improvement, hence I created this thread.
Any advice?
Thank you!