Work in progress

[OJay]

I am just creating this site in any spare lesuire time I get

http://www.geocities.com/a_j_oggie

I realise its hosted on geocities, but I cant be bothered getting a proper host until its complete . Any feedback and creative ideas would be appreciated, even criticism is welcome. This is my first ever site so any advice from the experienced would be appreciated .

Thanks, Adam

 

[daughterofeve]

Sweet!!! I love it! and.. even for being on geocities.. this is a really high quality lookin' site! I love that flash element added to it.. spiffy!

 

[itaca]

I don't really like the green on black to much but that's just my taste. Other than that good site but it needs more work done. Find another place to host it.

 

[alegend]

It looks awesome! I like how the whole thing is in flash, and the colors being used.

 

[sufi]

Good design but you should also use the blank space on top right area

 

[food_consult]

NICE NICE ... it is very clean and to the point

 

[Joe Tito]

Best looking thing on geocities I have ever seen. You should look into getting a web host!

 

[mikegangl]

i dunno... it's good but seems basic, like the color scheme is kind of.. cliche, you know? black and bright green. I do like the flash site, but i think because you are using flash, it should be a little more flashy (its ahrd to say what i'm thinking)

 

[OJay]

yeah i understand you mike gangl i shall try and make things a bit more flashy as i develop it, and thanks alot for all the feedback people it is appreciated . About using the space to the right, i was considering putting possibly a java menu, or just generally putting something other than flash there, but i dont know, i shall experiment to see what looks best. I admit the cliche colours were a sort of spin off the xbox colour regieme :D.

Anyway thanks again, Adam

Oh and I will be hosting it (properly), but only after its completed, or at least has all the needed context there.

 

[webgear]

Pretty nice!Cool flash animations and site design!

 

[GJ]

I like it but change the nav bar font!

 

[Joe Tito]

Oh and I will be hosting it (properly), but only after its completed, or at least has all the needed context there.

If you need any help with finding a host, or transfering your files to your new host. Please PM me, I'd be glad to help!

 

[SB_GEMINI]

I would change the font on the navigation bar, and also change the logo to something else otherwise pretty good

 

[nomis135]

its alright.
But you could do better.
More pro.

 

[OJay]

Wow, I didn't realise you guys were still posting here, again thanks for all the feedback and im sorry for neglecting you . I will be changing the font of the navigation bar seen as 2 of you suggested it, so ii will experiment with that.

Joe thanks for your kind offer, it is appreciated. I have added you to my buddy list so when I get round to completing the site, I may contact you for hosting help .

Thanks alot people! I shall make some adjustments to the site, make it more "professional", and will post a new thread once its completed so you can all comment on the end product.

Cheers, Adam