First design in about 10 years - should I have bothered!? :)

[neilfahey]

http://home.iprimus.com.au/jediwdog/stephens.htm

It's going to be at www.stephensboats.com when it's finished but I just thought I'd see if anyone had some constructive comments/criticism for me? Any help would be appreciated!
Thanks
Neil

 

[monaco]

OMG YOU SUCK YOU SHOULD BE BANNED FROM WEB DESIGN!!!

j/k, it looks pretty good :hehe:

 

[neilfahey]

I had a feeling someone might do that :P Glad ya like it!

 

[vip-ip]

OMG YOU SUCK YOU SHOULD BE BANNED FROM WEB DESIGN!!!
IM SERIOUS!!!
Nah, I'm just kidding, too

 

[monaco]

Lmao

 

[neilfahey]

:p

 

[sufi]

Nice try but it still has room for improvement.

 

[neilfahey]

Thanks sufi... I'd love to hear your (more specific) ideas!
Cheers
Neil

 

[snareklutz]

You should cosider using Lorem Ipsum for dummy text instead of putting "... Blah blah blah blah blah blah blablahblah blahblablah blah blah etcetera..."

Link: www.lipsum.com

 

[neilfahey]

Thanks snareklutz... Hopefully I'm getting all the proper text to put in there tonight anyways but I'll check it out for next time!

 

[Damo-Online]

I dont really see whats wrong all thought lots of work need to be done.

 

[neilfahey]

Well, instead of getting the copy & other info to put in lastnight from the client, they turned my world upside down. They've given me another boat to add and this dodgy dodgy header with flames on it. They wont accept that it makes the whole thing look completely ridiculous so I'm just gonna have to do what they want. I don't mind that much if their site looks crap because they want it to look crap but it also means I have to redo the whole damn thing!!! I guess I'll ask what you mean by "lots of work" when you've seen the new version...
Neil :p

 

[RageD]

Not bad, but then again, I am a coder, I am not the best one with images! Could use some improvement, but for the most part, pretty nice layout!

-RageD

 

[neilfahey]

Thanks RageD!

 

[StudioWorks]

Hey,

It's a little unorganized. I would create a nice header where I would place all thouse pictures.. smalle of course. then work my way down the content area and of course you could create nice navigation system ( menu ). Anyway if you dont want to put some hard work into creating your own web site you can always download some free templates

All the best,

SW

 

[Balkee867]

I like it except for one thing, I think you should change the font, and make it a color to blend in with the rest of the site.

 

[neilfahey]

Thanks for the tips!
:wave:

 

[bafoon]

site wont load, I cant view it.

 

[neilfahey]

That's odd... Anyone else having trouble? Still works for me in IE, NN & Firefox. What are you using bafoon?

 

[barefoottech]

Use Borders and Seperate Images from the text & Navigation
Create a nice Header

Plus MelbourneIT YUK ,most expensive Registrar in the World

As you are Aussie ,ring me
(check my WHois for any of my sites for number)