Joshua Harding
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Very true - the importance of copy can never be understated. Given that so few words appear on the initial landing page, each word carries more value. It's something I definitely intend to tweak, as I further consolidate what I want my brand image to be. Do you see potential in the immediate CTA, despite having a minimal flow?It’s an interesting idea. Trying to capture interest on first landing with words alone. The question then becomes - whether those words you chose are the best possible ones.
It's a decent looking site on a mobile device. A lot of fluff and not a lot of domains though.
You lost me as a potential customer when the button took me to Flippa.
Your image could and would be far more professional if you had your domains listed on the site.
Going in the right direction though.
Fantastic - thank you for your feedback. I've been playing around with the font sizes, so they're still a work in progress. I'll strongly consider your recommendations as I continue to make improvementsbad font sizes.
so large different in size between <h> tags and body fonts looks not professional
Here is a paragraph I'de like to suggest might benefit from a bit more personalized re-write:
Current -
Let's Talk
(1)Have any questions about the process?
(2) To submit a query, either fill out the form provided, or reach out to me directly at [email protected]. I'm here to help.
(3) In an industry built on trust and credibility, feel confident and secure that you will be offered a smooth experience - connecting you and your business with the domain you need.
BELOW is a suggested more personalized type of re-write -
(1) Do you have any questions about the process?
(2) To submit an inquiry just fill out the form provided or reach out to me directly!
I'm Joshua and I'm here to assist you in any way I can. You can always reach me at [email protected].
(3) In an industry built on trust and credibility, I want you to feel confident and secure that you will receive a professional, smooth experience - connecting you and your business with the domain you need.
The " Let's Talk " paragraph IMO is the most likely paragraph to propel a potential buyer to move forward with an inquiry / offer.