Tell my how my site looks

[Balkee867]

It's my first attempt at a site, tell me how it looks. I know I probably have a lot of editing to do, but it makes it easier to have some other peoples' opinions.

www.webtossup.com/index2.html

 

[monaco]

Looks good, though most of the links are dead (which is to b expected from a WIP). I don't know what people are going to think of the scheme, but good luck...

 

[Balkee867]

Thanks, and yeah, it's not complete quite yet, I still have a few pages to upload to my server.

Can I have some other opinions?

 

[ben51959]

Pretty good for a first attempt at a site... keep things simple when you first start off, I would get rid of the flash animation (top right). Good work

 

[bhyraj]

cool site. nice work. best for first.

 

[DanT07]

It doesnt load, almost crashed my system as well im sure of it

 

[LeetPCUser]

Needs a buttload of work to be honest. First off the text in the main body is atrotious and hard to read. The other thing is this site doesn't look professional at all. All of the text is capitalized. Why did you do this? If someone is using a screen reader it will shout your whole message at them. The navigation is also pretty poor.

 

[Balkee867]

Yeah I am going to change the font, I didn't put it in all caps, that's just what the font does. And yes, the navigation is messd up, a few of the pages aren't on my server yet. And as for the not loading, I think everytime you try to view in in IE it crashes. It is a coding error, and I will fix it. As for everyone using Firefox, it should work fine.

 

[Masahiro]

I think the use of "tossing off" isn't exactly shall we say... family freindly?

 

[ammo]

Dont really care for the design at all, too simple not proffesional. You need to change the font and make the design more usuer friendly!

 

[Balkee867]

will do

 

[.PJ]

I would say, lose the flash, its just too simple, and two, the images on the left are a touch small, they dont look the best, imho you could do better in paint.

Apart from that it looks good!

PJ

 

[StudioWorks]

I would get rid of the table borders ...

 

[mappaiyo]

also rid off the border from the main frame ? the purple color ...

 

[RichardAFCB]

Almost crashed my computer too! Didn't load - had to End Task on IE.

 

[little_china]

pretty nice first attempt...but i have to agree that you need to change the font. use all caps only for headers/titles...you may not get rid of the border, just increase the gap between the text and the border (cell space?). tell you what, it'll be more effective if you put color on the left side where the navigation menu is, and then remove the border

 

[Damo-Online]

It's ok but I dont really like the Step buttons to the left and perhaps the blue text could be made smaller. Its ok. but boring.

 

[killerid]

Would rate 10/10 for first attempt would rate 5/10 for if you had previous experience. What the new visitor who doesnt know will rate the site as 3/10 .Purple color is not for website other than girly websites that is. Images are squashed here and there . steps need to be well defined region and not squashed on the left side ...

So lots of work ahead of you.

 

[barefoottech]

It is very aptly name , when I first looked at the page I wanted to Tossup my lunch.
You have the Basis of a good concept but need to take all these suggestion on-board and redesign Page from scratch.
The page should be left or centre justified . Right Justification looks terrible
Colour selection is ok just use it a little muted.
Font is lousy in a word , verdana is used by major percentage of internet sites for one reason ,looks good.
Menu /Navigation Needs to be Arranged in orderly layout. At present looks like it was thrown on page.
Next thing ,your content , lose the comments about scams
More you talk about them ,more people get suspicious.
People if they have been scammed in the past ,don't want to be reminded .
Anyhow ,I hope the Site is a success.

 

[unknownz]

Your website is good, specially the flash animation on the logo i like that. I still think that you can improve your menu by using a better styled menu!