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[Rudy]

Hey guys,
I am currently writing a business plan, and am seriously thinking about incorporating into a LLC and launching my business that I have run as a sole-proprietorship since high school. I am a senior in college now, and if I do decide to go through with this, will hopefully have everything in order by the beginning of next summer.

Anyway, I have made some much needed changes to the layout of my website, and am wondering what your thoughts are on the overall thing:

http://www.smoothstoneservices.com

This is the design that I think I would like to keep, and use as I launch my business into a full-time operation and in the future, but I'd appreciate your comments.

Thanks!

- David

 

[barefoottech]

Nice enough design, but Could have a little more pages, information and a better layout.

The Web hosting for example is Too long , break it down into 2 pages
Page 1 the actual sales Pitch page.
page 2 the order page.

 

[Rudy]

Great idea to put the registration on a second page - I like that. As for information, I plan to add a whole lot more content if I decide to take this full time. I've got a 5-page business plan so far, and it's only in a partial rough draft form right now! Given, barely any of that will go onto the website word-for-word, but there's a lot more I can add to the website.

I also will of course add my business location, address, etc... once I have that squared away.

Thanks for the comments!

 

[Jacklin]

Design is too good but yes you have to try for a better layout and some more pages for giving more information about it

 

[tigrrra]

Needs a lot of work. You need a whole new design I would even consider using a wordpress script with a good template then having this as my selling page

 

[weblord]

the design is overall ok, clear information, good that's it's not too graphics intensive, design for the backend as well, maybe try wordpress or drupal for easy update on your part.

enhancements are needed like put up some flash header
good work.