Top 5 keywords on your site Vs. the top 5 on google's #1 site when "domains" is searched.
Report for http://www.zandale.com
Total Words: 5 Occurrences : 59
Word-----Count-----Density
domain-----24-----3.46 %
name-------12-----1.73 %
zandale-----9-----1.30 %
email--------7-----1.01 %
register-----7-----1.01 %
Filtered Page Entities
Title:
Home Page Zandale.com - Register a domain name, design your own Web site, get your own email address.
MetaKeywords:
zandale.com, register domain, register domain name, domain name registration, domain name, domain registration
MetaDescription:
Register your domain name, add personalized email, design your website all at Zandale.com.
Report for http://register4less.com/
Total Words: 5 Occurrences : 71
Word-----Count-----Density
domain-------24-----3.47 %
name---------15-----2.17 %
registration--12-----1.73 %
domains------11-----1.59 %
support-------9-------1.30 %
Filtered Page Entities
Title:
Domains - Register4Less.com | Domain Name Registration and Renewals
[/b]MetaKeywords:[/b]
domain name registration renewals register domains for less affordable top level domain name registration discount domain name renewals cheap internet web address domain name registration
MetaDescription:
Register your domain name for as low as $11.95. Services include new domain registration, renewals, and transfers. All purchases include 5MB banner-free web site hosting.
Your densitys are ok but your keyword choices are a little off. Certainly registration is a better word than register. You don't need zandale, it is definitley not needed in your meta tag. It's not a word anyone would ever type in. Maybe switch them around a bit and see what happens.
Here's the major reason why they are ranked #1 when "domains" is searched:
Inbound Links:
Google 72
AltaVista 2659
Lycos 358
MSN 0
Mamma 20
Fast;http 25980
AOL Search 13
Netscape 72