Review my site-- All r invited

[Robin]

Hello all,

All are invited to review my new site- CheckBlog

post your comments..

thnx

 

[SeanPreston]

Hi....

-I like the logo however the paw print is way too big.
-the button on the left side of the page, looks old and just boring, also is it not supposed to scroll with the page?

-The layout of the entire site is just messy, you need to ensure that anything located in a box is inline with other items.

-Green text on green background etc...Dont mix the colours.


It's a good start though and I like the main blog area.

 

[Robin]

Thanks for a view, I will surely change the paw size.
left button has been made scrolling, thin and got new color.
regarding messy, well, just to prevent any white space, i have done it. i have tested on my other PC, its looking fine.

regarding background, i have made them more lighter and lighter


thnx buddy

 

[Krist]

Really logo of your website is attractive publish your website in search engine and get traffic...

 

[Robin]

thnks buddy i am doing that...waitin for google to index my site, submitted 4 days ago..

 

[Monic@]

Hi)))
Just have seen your website)
On the whole, nice job, most of all I liked pics and that pretty paw at the top)))
But frankly speaking the whole right part of the page seems to me encumbered with banners, and on some of them the print size is too small (as for me)
(I've also found a mistake: in a top yellow rectangle is written "Sitemap ARE created")
))

 

[Robin]

thanks for notifying about ARE.. :D, i will make some changes to sidebar. The pic gallery is created by me. I think i should TM the paw, it is getting quite famous.

 

[Cluedort]

Your site is really simple and also with a good logo as all said.. Have some good widgets to make it look nice.

 

[joeljonathan]

The site is all over the place. There needs to be some consistency with the site. Line everything up. Get rid of some of the advertisements and flashing banners and Google site links. Consider putting up a tag line or something so that people know what the site is even about in the first place.

 

[barefoottech]

All over the place like a mad womans breakfast.

No design style or balance.
HTML is displaying on the ABOUT page
There is disjointed and un-related content. What exactly is the focus??
Excessive pointless ads
The logo is good but is only a stock one (I have the exact same one in a downloaded PLR resource file)
No need to list multiple contact EMAILs. Just use one.
BFT Score is 1.5 out of 10

 

[stephy]

The site is on the wonders of the world, and has nice little articles on them. you can improve it by adding some more details and links to the articles. The pictures can also be increased for each wonder, looking at it from different angles.

 

[tkstark]

the main page needs a focal point. what's the most important element? what do you want people to be sure to see? what do you want them to see first? when you answer those question, design it to make sure that is where our eyes land first.

right now, it's jumbled. after the logo (i like the fun lettering, by the way), the first thing i focus on is your shout out to bing. it's too prominent. it's prominence, and the other thing about bing later on, results in bing being the 'star' of the page.

next i see the box with the words "Welcome to WebAunt. Have a good stay. Browse our articles."

ok, you're inviting us to browse your articles, but nothing about the design or the copy so far gives us a clue as to what kind of site this is. 'web aunt' tells us nothing (tho the name is vaguely suggestive in some way of...something) and i can't tell what relevance the paw print has to the name or to the site. even your navigation bar is cryptic. it has no links to any topics, which contributes to the feeling that this is a site about nothing in particular.

'christ the redeemer' in bold type gave me the impression this was a religious site, but when i read the copy it seemed like just a random factoid put there, i guess, to justify the photos.

ah, down at the bottom i see that this is to be a 'general' site with information about 'many subjects.'

not good. 'general' is great if you're salon.com with an array of talented contributors addressing a wide variety of regimented topics. but i see no reason for anyone but your friends and family to visit web aunt. there is no compelling subject to draw readers/users and no keywords in the name that anyone will ever search for. since you won't attract motivated users, who will click on your ads and why will they click on them?

i hope you don't think i'm being harsh or excessively critical. i'm giving you the kind of comments that i would want to receive - it's one person's honest, objective reaction to the site.

websites need to be driven by passion - either a passion for the topic, a passion to provide a service, a passion to make money or even just a passion to learn how to create a site. i don't get a sense of passion or direction from web aunt.

 

[maxeaus]

OK, a few tips, I'm not sure what your site dose, but you need to make it obvious, whatever that may be, i like the paw print, but again, I'm not sure what it pertains too.

You need to work on your use of phrase "Welcome to WebAunt. Have a good stay. Browse our articles" would be better saying Welcome to Web Aunt, we hope you enjoy your visit" or something like that.

Also "main purpose is to spread knowledge and idea" it's "ideas". Now the thing i REALY do not like is the area with the Bing spiel, all that TM, copyright stuff looks totally contrived, get rid of it please!

The other thing that is on the verge of being annoying is the amount of advertising, if you measured your page you will see you have more advertising than content, NOT GOOD!

I'm a hard bastard to please, so i hope you got a few things out of my observations.

 

[keddy1]

Great concept and design. I like your site. But you need more pictures to decorate it.

 

[stevekolers]

Now that is lovely. You have done a fantastic job, and I have no negative feedback to give you.