[REQ BANNER] - 'SALE BANNER' for teeth whitening website.

[fryzie]

Website: www.whitersmile.com.au
Description: Need a 'sale banner' on the front page to attract more customers. I don't care what keywords you put on it. I would like you to be creative with this. But you have to have something like 'Birthday Sale' on it. and 'Up to 50% off'.
Position: The banner will go on the front page just above 'Its not just a business'
Prize: $40 USD Paypal
Colors: That match the page
Size: Needs to fit the page, nothing overly big or small.


Example: Below is an example of something I REALLY like

 

[c24_net]

 

[nameXpert]

 

[fryzie]

c24_net - the hardness of the background is too in your face - put it up against the rest of the page and you can see it doesn't fit. Height is too big. Need to lighten/soften the background and reduce the height. Get rid of 'Special Sale' - what's a special sale?

nameXpert - cute idea of the girl holding a dog, but I don't like the look of the girl. It looks like you colored her teeth in white, also she looks blurry. The picture is too long - it doesn't fit on the page. Dont like the text style used. Same if you take your pic and put it up against the rest of my page, it doesnt match the design of the page.

 

[Xcore]

can you give us a size guide to work with? Like a maximum and minimum?

First concept, made it simular to your banner, and used the same people just rendered off. Used the size of the "one you like."

Feedback would be nice.

Xcore.

 

[c24_net]

 

[fryzie]

use the same approx size of the banner i gave

Xcore.. obviously you cant use the same pictures, so its hard to judge what it would be like with different ones.

c24_net.. The couple picture is too far back - by looking at the couple you wouldn't think the banner would have anything to do with teeth whitening. also get rid of that 'get your whiter smile today'. Looking at it by itself is looks good, but when you add on the page, i dont think it really fits in with the rest of the page. - try adding a little light blue to the part of the background, and change the border so a light blue

 

[coolwanz]

working on my entry.....

 

[tysonjb]

My Attempt...

Here is my 1st Concept:

2nd Concept:

Hope these are along the lines that you were wanting
Feedback is Welcomed!

Regards,
Tyson

 

[c24_net]

 

[VictoriaAnn]

I think this is a good size for the page.

 

[nameXpert]

 

[coolwanz]

my try later

 

[nevesman]

 

[tysonjb]

???

Any news on the status of this contest?

 

[VictoriaAnn]

There isn't actually an end date on the initial post - is that allowed?

 

[fryzie]

oh crap
i forgot about this

will review soon

 

[coolwanz]

mine is coming up soon....

 

[fryzie]

*** THIS WILL END IN 24 HOURS ***

VictoriaAnn not keen on that ladies face, also all the writing looks a little cramped. overall look type and colors are nice though.

nameXpert, sorry dont think the whole look goes with the page.

nevesman, yours looks nice, the colors match the rest of my page really well. If you got the time can you try a different approach to the writing... work off tysonjbs a bit.

tysonjb and c24_net - i like both of yours also, leave as is.



It will be hard for me to pick.

 

[tysonjb]

-:: Thanks For The Feedback ::-