PREview - review of QuickCreditLoans.com

[GoPC]

I've just completed the site design and am ready to post it to my domain except for the affiliate links (which I will add as I post)

I'm looking for comments on design, feel, spelling/gramaticals or whatever.

CLICK THIS TEMORARY SITE - QuickCreditLoans.temp

$100 NP$ to the first solid review
$75 for the next, then $50, then $25 (all NP$)

If all is good, I will launch ASAP. The plan is to point EasyLendMortgage.com to the Mortgage page, FastCreditService.com to the Credit Card page and QuickCreditServices.com to the Student Loan page. That was I can maximize my SEO and traffic.

What do you think?

Thanks for looking.

GoPC

 

[Man In The Box]

I spotted three grammatical/spelling errors:

a) "These loans will put money in your account electronically in about an hour that you an spend IMMEDIATELY."

I'm guessing that is supposed to be can. May I suggest adding a "so" between "hour" and "that"?

b) "Our Affilated Lenders offer programs for all levels of Credit Performance. The Credit, Loans or Mortgage you need RIGHT NOW is just a Click away.

Affilated should be spelt Affiliated and Click doesn't need to be capitalized.

Now onto the review.

- A simplistic but clean and sleek design. It doesn't overwhelm the eyes, so that's a plus. It takes up about 66% of the space which is good because it makes the website less busy, and it leaves the opportunity to add a background of some sort (a background with a watermarked image, perhaps).

- The logo, though small, is nicely done. The images in the navigation bar in my opinion are not necessary, but it's not really a negative.

- Color scheme? Only several colors, no obstructively-bright hues and the reds and leafy greens compliment the white background. Simple, but effective.

Overall, very good. One of the better-looking sites I've seen that feature few images in the template. Good work.

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[GoPC]

Excellent post. Thank you for being honest. $100 NP$ have been deposited in your account.

Off to make some changes.

GoPC

 

[allabout42]

Okay here's my review:

1) You might want to increase the width of your site from 720px to at least 730px to accommodate for the leaderboard ad at the bottom of the page.
2) The logo needs to be larger, since on larger screen resolutions, it is hard to read. Also the quickcreditloans text should be the emphasis in the logo. I'm not sure what a tree has to do with loans, but you might want to consider replacing it with a $ sign?
3) I don't really see the need for the date fxn on the upper-right corner. I think that you should take it out and use the space to expand the logo.
3) When, I click on the students tab, it takes me to a mailto:[email protected], instead of a page...
4) The footer can read DMediaWest.com instead of http://www.DMediaWest.com
5) Also change your google ad link color to #CC3300 to match your links in your site. You might want to make your links bold too to really match the adsense ads.

All in all, it's a great site. I like the overall feel of the site. It's very clean, professional, and has a good choice of colors. I wish you the best of luck with your site!

-Allabout42

 

[Coopey]

Hi there,

It looks lean and the colours are nice and inoffensive. The colour-scheme makes it look like a finance site.

I think the Google Ads on the left, especially with them being so high up, make it look a little less professional and more like the site exists only to solicit clicks.

The main image works well, but the animated advert on the right looks too much like a casino affiliate advert with the piles of money- in fact I thought it was until I watched it cycle through.

I would also make the hover colour for the links a slightly different shade to the standard colour as there's not much difference at the moment.

 

[GoPC]

Thanks again for all your opinions. Looks like I have some more work to do

Allabout -- Good point on the DMedia addy. That must have been added by the Department of Redundancy Department.

Sid -- What do you mean by Hover Color? Where?

Also, I know what you mean about the animated ad... it bothers me too. I'm going to change it.

Anyone else?

GoPC

 

[Coopey]

Sid -- What do you mean by Hover Color? Where?

Hi again,

I was referring to the CSS for when you hover the mouse pointer over a link-

a:hover {
	font-family: Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;	
	font-size: 11px;	
	color: #990000;
	text-decoration: none;
}

It changes colour- but it is not very noticable.
I would either change color to a lighter red, or have 'underline' as a text decoration.