Plz Review Header I just made for commission.

[IceCee]

First ever commission in this forum, hopefully he will accept ^^;

bigger version:

for http://www.darkfuel.com

Please review it.

 

[fishistheice]

Oh yeah, cool header. Definitely better than the old one.

 

[IceCee]

Cheers mate, I'm glad you like it. Here's the bigger version that I'm supposed to have made:

 

[aaronfalloon]

Looks good, thumps up!

BTW Link not working on the second picture.

 

[IceCee]

Thanks bro! Yea I typed the wrong link apparently. Just fixed it now hehe

BTW : I did that for $20, is it a good deal?

 

[lilgee]

Looks nice. great job

 

[IceCee]

Thanks lilgee.!

 

[Rajo]

it's good
but i suggest you post a test page with the header on te page to see the overall look
you can found great invdividuals items but when put it all together it may nork nicely

 

[IceCee]

Yes I know. I should have done that.. but anyway thanks for the tips

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y192/icecee_au/darkfuel_header_xxx.jpg

Well he wanted it more cartoony, so I made it more cartoony. How about now?

 

[LeetPCUser]

It looks pretty good. The only thing I can say is that there is too much blue.

 

[admans]

It looks pretty good. The only thing I can say is that there is too much blue.

I also feel the same..also in the large img. I think the font clarity is not quite up2 the mark. It should have been more sharper or clearer IMHO..

 

[IceCee]

OK Done as you guys suggested.. added more white and clarified the text

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y192/icecee_au/darkfuel_header_xxx.jpg

 

[infestacide]

looking good mate, i will keep you in mind if i need one done

 

[IceCee]

looking good mate, i will keep you in mind if i need one done

!! Yes I am always looking for clients who have good tastes.

 

[def1]

Yea its alright but too much blue and the the font is not too good. But its straight keep at it