Please review

[vlad230]

Hi Guys!

I just finished a new website about concept cars that I personally coded and designed

I would appreciate it if you could give it a mark from 1 to 10 ( 1 being the worst and 10 the best)

And of course some advice in improving the website is greatly appreciated

Cheers,
Vlad

 

[-NC-]

7/10!

Points off for:
- On the home page, I can't click on the image of the car to get through to the detail ( I suggest it does )

- The detail page doesn't have more/bigger pictures
( I suggest the detail page has 3 images down the left hand side, and clicking on any one of them opens a nice big image, or takes you to the wallpapers page for it + a link under the image which says something like "View all wallpapers for this car" )

- Moving menu links irritated me, especially considering that not only did the menu item hovered over moves, but also the previous one I hovered over
( I suggest that if you must have moving menu items, ONLY the one that you are currently hovered over moves )

Additional Suggestion:
- Rename the "Articles" link in the menu to "All Cars", as I did not find it clear that would take me to "All Cars"

:imho:

EDIT: had another look ( because those cars are cool, I want a challenger! ), also noticed that the link on the detail page takes you to.... the detail page! I suggest it takes you to the wallpaper page for that car.

 

[GiorgosK]

I don't particularly like that the menu is flash (its also annoying me) but if you want to keep consider adding a similar html menu all the way to the bottom to help search engines index properly your site ...

consider making the home page just small photos with a few words description and then giving more details in the "more" section ...

design 7/10

 

[Mike]

also 7/10

in addition to the above, i'm missing the video implementation - i'm sure there's a way to make a flash player look equally sleek as the cars that you have on your site.

also, the logo rolling in on EVERY single page gets annoying pretty quickly. I'd suggest to roll the logo on every 3rd page your user is viewing and for the rest of the pages, leave it static.
Also, if you have an option to bring some "movement" into your logo - not literally moving your logo, it would eventually solve the problem altogether.


Other than that, i think you've done a great job with the simplicity yet effectivity of your design/layout.

IB

 

[bigu_c]

Next time, I'll build a Car Wallpaper site, that's for Luxury car only, do you want to exchange link with me? Logo or link text are excepted!