Please Review my site

[Ash]

Hi,
Tell me what you think of www.portableplanet.co.uk. Please note it was my first website that i made, and i now can do much better. Infact, im working on a new design and features right now, but tell me what you think of it at the moment now anyway.

Cheers.

 

[GFX^^]

wow, to be your first website is great, I think you should make it cleaner to improve the design

 

[dojo]

Good site for a starter .. when I recall having a front page template as my first site I am feeling very "humble" :D

You need to put the header image in a center alignment as the main part. Other than that ...it's not bad at all ..

 

[Ash]

Hmm thanks for the suggestions.

 

[peter phillips]

Looks good considering it's your first site. Just a suggestion enhance the look of the menu and try another font for the content. I guess it would look perfect then.

 

[Ash]

Any fonts in particular you think would go well? Maybe verdana?

 

[B33R]

I'd enhance the header text, maybe change the font and make the text stand out more. Then center the header text in the lower box rather than the whole header box.

The two menus in the main section (left and right sides), make them slightly darker so they stand out a bit more. They blend in too much with the rest of the page IMHO.

Other than those small points it looks pretty good.
Good job!

EDIT: Verdana usually works good for main text.

 

[peter phillips]

I agree, Verdana would be the best font for the main text.

 

[Stella]

I hate to disagree with most of the others here. But it's bland and rather boring. If I came across it I wouldn't give it a second glance.

 

[vanisha]

hi ash

for someone who has never created a wesite and being the first it is VERY good. I think there is too much information on the front page making it too busy besides that it is a good start.

well done

vanisha

 

[Ash]

Hi i have changed it quite a bit since i last posted. Any opinions on it now?

 

[Stella]

Lot's Better Ash! :hi:
I like the way you've used the light colours and haven't gone overboard with too many different things going on designwise.

 

[Janine]

Design Style: 4/10
Originality: 5/10
Overall Rating: 4/10
To start off, You need to fix the:
Navigation Buttons

This ewe Button:

or your overall site design. >_<

I really wanna close this window when I saw your website. the images.
Very Nice to hear that you'll make a new design, I'll review your website after your done with your new design.

Thank You
-Janine