Please review my Advertising Video

[benchrest]

Had a video made to advertise my Social Bookmarking site. What do you think? I think this is another good tool for SEO plus just another way to get your sites out there. Thanks in advance

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pjOhoZHyj7A

 

[NPQueen]

I didn't really like the introduction. The wavy effect made it very difficult to even know what it said. Actually I think that all of the effects on the main text is a little too much. I liked what you were doing with the web pages behind the text. It was just difficult to read the main points as they were going through their various changes.

I like the idea though! Good luck to you :tu:

 

[sarah_harvey]

The main Points were good. But I didn't like all the effects. Often the simplest things convey the best meaning.

If I had to make suggestions, it would be this:

Start again with the intro. Just let the Main title Fade in. It usually takes up to 5 seconds for a headline to sink in. Then let it fade out again. Do not add water effects or anything. Next take your main bullet points and and the website which you displayed in the background. The headlines should appear in between the actual displaying of the website. Thus it would be less cluttered. You can add shot remarks on the actual website when it displays to prove a point or point to something significant.

Beyond the headlines, also reinstate "what is in it for me" to the viewer. People always want to know the benefits.

You can also be creative with design when you are not displaying the website in the background. But as with everything... in moderation.

The music is great so it's a matter of redoing it.
However make the music fade out in the end then letting it just end abruptly.