Outgoing email

[Toby H]

how is this for an outgoing email?

Good day,


I am writing to let you know that *******.com is for sale.


It is a desirable, keyword domain that would serve very well as a primary domain, or to drive traffic to your website. It's easy to type and remember for your users, and provides a strategic edge among the competition. It is a strong investment that will continue to serve the company for years to come.


If you are interested in this great domain name, please feel free to email me at your earliest convenience.


Have a wonderful day,

 

[Jurgen Wolf]

I am writing to let you know that *******.com is for sale.

Just this 1 sentence is enough.

 

[Toby H]

Surely you gotta sell it a little bit?

 

[Jurgen Wolf]

Let them to decide how good is your domain...
Your own appraisal and thoughts are unnecessary here.

 

[Toby H]

Ok thanks I see your point. Anybody else have input?

 

[MR Harrist]

most of the cases when we do outbond, usually we dont get sales! because we all know that domain are not that good! that's why we do outbond! but we curious, how ppl react! we tell them we sell our domain
1 or 2 ppl sometime hit spam button! but that's ok! as long we don't send them email more than 1 or 2! and not making thousand ppl hit spam button we safe!

my point is, don't worry about the words! because our job is to create awareness, not to make sales with outbond! sure, sometime with outbond works and make fast sales! but if you ask ppl here! I don't think outbond have high impact with our domain sales! but if we do outbond, we get their attention! and soon or later, IF our domain much more better than his domain, he will comeback and ask! how much!

But it's not gonna happen fast! especially if your domain price are expensive! just think like them! what if you got email from someone, and they sell a hand reg domain for $5K, ? and the domain they sell, are long domain name with number and hypen,com! for sure, you'll get reply! Good Job Scammer! but No thanks !

but if your domain quite decent, and better from them! maybe they will think back on another day! sometime they just go to marketplace, or negotiate! though, 1 thing that will never change! if your domain not better than them, most of the time, sales will not happen! no matter how good your sales letter!

 

[Toby H]

I see! Thanks for the informative response.

 

[MR Harrist]

just be nice like salesman always do, something like Hi Mr, I want to sell domain or something like that! but since the goal is not sales, when he he give low ball, you just ignore and move on! if you hoping to much with outbond, the chance is, you will take low ball offer! just consider outbond something like foreplay! or something like that! though, again, it will work for decent domain, don't have to be good, but decent!

 

[Kate]

I don't like your sales pitch at all. I would trash it immediately and treat like spam, which it probably is. It's the same cookie-cutter sentences you find in SEO spam.
Any outbound should be very targeted and tailored to the recipient.

 

[Toby H]

Haha awesome. Thanks for the advice again!

 

[Toby H]

I don't like your sales pitch at all. I would trash it immediately and treat like spam, which it probably is. It's the same cookie-cutter sentences you find in SEO spam.
Any outbound should be very targeted and tailored to the recipient.

Oh I see! That makes sense. Thanks for the support.

 

[Jurgen Wolf]

The most profitable are passive sales...
+ https://www.namepros.com/blog/poll-...t-your-domains-on.1036144/page-2#post-6313242

 

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the more you try to sell a name, the more the buyer is going to question the need for it