i want Professional review please

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the website just done with it, i want honest review and Professional please.

www.kydepot.com , www.kentuckydepot.com

Reputation will be added to people who review this website honestly

Thank you

Tv

 

[sleepysentry]

Your layout is very nice. It is easy to see and the colors flow smoothly in my opinion. Below are my suggestions:

1. Your "Home" and "Kentucky Depot Online Store" text looks bad. Remove the shadow on it and you should be fine. I would aim for clear and crisp like the rest of your text.

2. Your Yahoo ad is annoying. Try choosing a different shade of green to blend it in with the site if you can. You might also want to try using square box ads in your content to get a higher CTR.

3. Work on your grammar. There are very obvious grammatical errors on your website. With all the hard work you put in your design, do you really want your use of grammar to ruin the effect? For example

Exchange experiences and help in KyDepot community is a strong service provided to our new members click here and signup to get help on how to use KyDepot store and learn the right way to profit from our services, moderators and other members will answer your questions any time you need help join them here

Should be

Exchange experiences and help the KyDepot community, a strong service provided to our new members. Click here and signup to get help on how to use the KyDepot store and learn the right way to profit from our services. Moderators and other members will answer your questions any time you need help. You can join them here.

To make it even better, I would change your wording to make sound more attractive like I did below.

Exchange experiences and help the KyDepot community, a great place for locals to share experiences, chat, get help, and more. Click here to sign up as a seller at the KyDepot store, a great place to sell your unwanted goods to people near you or for finding deals on items for sale in Kentucky. We have everything eBay has right here in Kentucky!

An experienced marketer could write something even better than I did above.

As your website grows, you may want to talk to local businesses about advertising on your website. You may be surprised how much you get because you will be giving them a target market of local customers.

Good luck! I think you have a great idea.

 

[-TV-]

thank you so much for your review was very interesting and on the level , did some work on the gram.. and i am going to find out a good way for "home" , but truely i apreciate and respect your point of view

thank you

Tv

 

[vslevin]

One quick thing... it looks like you spelled "store" wrong in your avatar.

 

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i am a typo man, no wonder why i created faxreport software, will fix that thnx anyway lol

Tv

 

[danBoT]

As it is a store the design is alright. But to me the layout is very crowded and the colors don't get to well together as well as the font isn't the best choice IMO but with a little twiking that site will be killer. PS the colors might just be me

 

[-TV-]

As it is a store the design is alright. But to me the layout is very crowded and the colors don't get to well together as well as the font isn't the best choice IMO but with a little twiking that site will be killer. PS the colors might just be me

thank you for your review

Tv

 

[zehrila]

Catched my attention in first few seconds, websites are really done well , pretty much seo`d. Only thing that hurted me a bit was yellow/brownish colour but it still looks very pro.
Best of luck.

 

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Catched my attention in first few seconds, websites are really done well , pretty much seo`d. Only thing that hurted me a bit was yellow/brownish colour but it still looks very pro.
Best of luck.

thank you for your review , zehrila .

Tv

 

[PolurNET]

Perhaps get rid of the underline on the right hand side for the larger text blocks. It's got a good general look, but could use some icons or graphics for some of the sections

 

[-TV-]

Perhaps get rid of the underline on the right hand side for the larger text blocks. It's got a good general look, but could use some icons or graphics for some of the sections

i will look at it and see what i can do , thank you so much for your review perhaps,


Tv

 

[Hitch]

Hi,

Looks good.

However, i think if you changed the background colour to something lighter, it would be alot better, the dark colour just doesn't go with the orange and blues.

Also, it would be better wider.

My last thing, the text that says "Catagories", you shoul change the colour, it doesn't match the rest of the site.

Hope this helps.

Adrian

 

[-TV-]

Hi,

Looks good.

However, i think if you changed the background colour to something lighter, it would be alot better, the dark colour just doesn't go with the orange and blues.

Also, it would be better wider.

My last thing, the text that says "Catagories", you shoul change the colour, it doesn't match the rest of the site.

Hope this helps.

Adrian

thank you for your review

Tv

 

[maplater]

Upon first glance the site looks quite professional and the layout works well. I would try to state the fact that this site is specifically for residence of Kentucky in a more upfront place, such as moving the "Why chose KyDepot" box above the fold.

Also on the homepage the two different shades of green used for three title bars seem out of place, since they are not really seen anywhere else on the site.

All of my suggestions are only involve minor changes so overall your site seems great, best of luck.

 

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Upon first glance the site looks quite professional and the layout works well. I would try to state the fact that this site is specifically for residence of Kentucky in a more upfront place, such as moving the "Why chose KyDepot" box above the fold.

Also on the homepage the two different shades of green used for three title bars seem out of place, since they are not really seen anywhere else on the site.

All of my suggestions are only involve minor changes so overall your site seems great, best of luck.

thank you maplater for your review good point on the "I would try to state the fact that this site is specifically for residence of Kentucky in a more upfront place"

thank you bud

Tv

 

[smallpc]

I'd change "Sale-It" to "Sell-It" unless you're going for a play on word.

 

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I'd change "Sale-It" to "Sell-It" unless you're going for a play on word.

thank you, rep added

Tv

 

[-TV-]

any other review , ? something that i forgot....,

 

[fmauniverse]

Site review

Hi. First of all, I like the template really much. Clear, good chosen colours, well-based site navigation and content. Second, the community forum has quite a nice style. Third, I think you need to remove some Yahoo Ads or place them in a different block.

Overall Rating: 9/10

Good luck with your site!

If you liked my review and comments, you can add rep for me.

Regards.

 

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Hi. First of all, I like the template really much. Clear, good chosen colours, well-based site navigation and content. Second, the community forum has quite a nice style. Third, I think you need to remove some Yahoo Ads or place them in a different block.

Overall Rating: 9/10

Good luck with your site!

If you liked my review and comments, you can add rep for me.

Regards.

thank you for your comment and review rep added

Tv