This is the template I use:
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Currently this domain is registered with GoDaddy and cannot be transferred to another registrar for a period of 60 days because I just acquired this domain through a backorder. Most registrars have a certain period of time that you have to wait until you can transfer the domain out of their registrar. I know GoDaddy has a 60 day latency period where you have to wait to transfer, once the time has elapsed you are free to transfer the domain, this is standard with any registrar once the ownership of a domain changes. Having the domain at GoDaddy is no different than at Network Solutions, but once the time elapses you will be able to transfer it out to the registrar of your choosing. I do apologize for this inconvenience but a temporary work around would be to create a GoDaddy account, if you do not already have one, and then transfer the domain to Network Solutions after 60 days.
If you do not have a GoDaddy account there is no cost to open one. Once you provide me with your account id # and email address I can transfer the domain to you. The transfer is instant, once I initiate the transfer GoDaddy will send you a series of emails containing instructions on how to accept transfer of the domain.
Once you confirm receipt of the domain I will request proof of payment, either a fax of a cashier's check or bank transfer.
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Cheers,
Ben