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daughterofeve

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• Mar 21, 2005

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Sweet!!! I love it! and.. even for being on geocities.. this is a really high quality lookin' site! I love that flash element added to it.. spiffy!

 

itaca

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• Mar 21, 2005

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I don't really like the green on black to much but that's just my taste. Other than that good site but it needs more work done. Find another place to host it.

 

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• Mar 22, 2005

• #4

It looks awesome! I like how the whole thing is in flash, and the colors being used.

 

sufi

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• Mar 22, 2005

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Good design but you should also use the blank space on top right area

 

food_consult

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• Mar 22, 2005

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NICE NICE ... it is very clean and to the point

 

Joe Tito

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• Mar 22, 2005

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Best looking thing on geocities I have ever seen. You should look into getting a web host!

 

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mikegangl

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• Mar 22, 2005

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i dunno... it's good but seems basic, like the color scheme is kind of.. cliche, you know? black and bright green. I do like the flash site, but i think because you are using flash, it should be a little more flashy (its ahrd to say what i'm thinking)

 

OJay

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• Mar 22, 2005

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yeah i understand you mike gangl i shall try and make things a bit more flashy as i develop it, and thanks alot for all the feedback people it is appreciated . About using the space to the right, i was considering putting possibly a java menu, or just generally putting something other than flash there, but i dont know, i shall experiment to see what looks best. I admit the cliche colours were a sort of spin off the xbox colour regieme :D.

Anyway thanks again, Adam

Oh and I will be hosting it (properly), but only after its completed, or at least has all the needed context there.

 

webgear

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• Mar 22, 2005

• #10

Pretty nice!Cool flash animations and site design!

 

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GJ

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• Mar 23, 2005

• #11

I like it but change the nav bar font!

 

Joe Tito

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• Mar 23, 2005

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OJay said:

Oh and I will be hosting it (properly), but only after its completed, or at least has all the needed context there.

Click to expand...

If you need any help with finding a host, or transfering your files to your new host. Please PM me, I'd be glad to help!

 

SB_GEMINI

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• Mar 23, 2005

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I would change the font on the navigation bar, and also change the logo to something else otherwise pretty good

 

nomis135

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• Mar 23, 2005

• #14

its alright.
But you could do better.
More pro.

 

OJay

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• Mar 25, 2005

• #15

Wow, I didn't realise you guys were still posting here, again thanks for all the feedback and im sorry for neglecting you . I will be changing the font of the navigation bar seen as 2 of you suggested it, so ii will experiment with that.

Joe thanks for your kind offer, it is appreciated. I have added you to my buddy list so when I get round to completing the site, I may contact you for hosting help .

Thanks alot people! I shall make some adjustments to the site, make it more "professional", and will post a new thread once its completed so you can all comment on the end product.

Cheers, Adam