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HFear

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• Sep 22, 2004

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IMHO, the layout is very simple and plain. Add a bit more in the banner instead of just a text and some cloud images, maybe you should add a logo in there and add a style to the text also. I'd give this layout a 2/5, trust me this is just the beginning you'll get better if you practice more often and check out other designs and tutorials. Good luck with the designing.

 

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elitecodex

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• Sep 22, 2004

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I forgot to mention that I didnt know what to do with the banner so I left it as is and just put the text in there as a placer.

Thanks for the feedback

 

Hazard

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• Sep 22, 2004

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if this one of your first? because its good if it is. I agree with Hellfear on everything he says. Its very original, the overal layout is nice, just needs modernising, get rid of some of the clouds.

Good luck
- Haz

 

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elitecodex

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• Sep 24, 2004

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Its not my first complete layout in photoshop... Its my third technically.

So what do you mean by modernizing? Im not sure I follow that.

Ok, clouds are gone... I didnt like them much either. But I wanted something for texture... Ill figure something out.

 

hanz

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• Sep 24, 2004

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hm...
this is nice

 

StudioWorks

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• Sep 29, 2004

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what are you going to use this layout for ? gaming site ? if that's a yes.. then you did a good job.

 

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elitecodex

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• Oct 1, 2004

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I dont think Im gonna use it... just keep it

I do want to re-design for a personal script site... would it be fitting for that kind as well? Im still learning the whole 'design' part of it

 

Joe Tito

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• Oct 1, 2004

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Complaints
-You need to fix all the html for the images. If the windows width is too low, all the images go out of place. You might wanna checkt that out
-The banner is empty, so much room, so little to look at
-Outside border is white. There is a white border all around the layout. Make the bg color the same as the bg of the image

Compliments
-Very original layout. It's nice to see change from the typical 2/3 column layout
-I'm definately liking the navigation placement. You don't see something like that very often.
-What you have for the banner now looks good, but if you expanded on it some more it could look awesome

There's my 2 cents

Overall it's a nice layout!

 

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elitecodex

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• Oct 3, 2004

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Thank you for the comments joe.

I think Im gonna take that concept into my next site design... but make it look better Thanks alot for all the input!

 

Joe Tito

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• Oct 3, 2004

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I'ts what im here for bro. Honest opinions. I hate being lied to myself, so I won't lie to others

 

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ravina

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• Oct 5, 2004

• #12

nice banner

hello mate

as you say your design is good but i think it is very simple.

you should put any text or any other images

thanks
ravina

 

Joeydabomb

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• Oct 5, 2004

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i like it, but i dont like the banner 1 and banner 2 part.

 

Miyavi

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• Oct 5, 2004

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Just make it more resolution-friendly, and I think you've got something there.