Would appreciate some advice on my site.

[evatw001]

Hi,

I just started up my business and created a site, We sell Cuban Cigars, I would like advice on how to increase functionality and streamline the whole process.

Thanks for the help in advance,
T

 

[andr69]

The design aspect is really splendid - your web site looks fantastic!!

 

[maxeaus]

I love the look of the site, the brown looks good given the subject. You have some very bad Grammar and spelling mistakes though, a simple spell check fixes these up, i did it for you below, i suggest you check every page of your content as you will be slapped by the search engines otherwise. I had to re write your entire page basically, and I'm still not THAT happy with it.

"You are entering the world of Cuban cigars. We are glad that you decided to, welcome to the phenomenal movement of Cuban cigars. Now is your chance to try all the options we have specially created for all the Cuban tobacco smokers and buy cigars online.

You are part of this fantastic community of Cuban cigar connoisseurs. Walk with us through our cigar shop and you will have the chance to purchase one of the offers designed exclusively for Cuban cigars lovers.....like you. With GoCubans cigar shop, you will find the best quality and largest variety of cigars in the Cuban cigars world.

Choosing Cuban cigars is the best decision you have ever made. Allow your palate to try the best cigar flavors, aromas and spicy brands of Cuban cigars. Our online shop has created all these special offers especially for the large community of Cuban cigar lovers. The experience of lighting one of our best Cuban cigars will stay in your mouth forever."