What is wrong with this ad and site?

[jasontn]

http://www.namepros.com/advertising...h-engine-optimization-one-one-consulting.html

I am selling SEO consulting and reports but no backlinking or link exchange work. This site is getting many views but no contacts.

 

[Tia Wood]

Overall: there is not enough upselling going on.

First impressions:

- I have no idea who you are.
- The site looks spamish.
- All I see is $50 but nothing to focus my attention on why I should part with that.

Here are a few sites that offer services/coaching/etc for you to see the difference:

Relationship Advice, Relationship Coaching Marriage Advice
How To Start A Business
SEO Mofo » World’s Greatest SEO

 

[enlytend]

Spell check would help too (extension, not extention.)

- I have no idea who you are.

Ditto. What makes you qualified to offer this service? I don't see the answer on that page.

 

[rohnsmith]

I think you cannot promote it directly your ads...

 

[vanmed]

Peope develop an impression of an overall ad and decide very much objectively whether they feel that the ad is legitimate or not. I would really step back from your ad and ask yourself if you would contact yourself. I give you kudos for asking the forum, and the advice is very valid. If you need help designing an ad, there are a lot of qualified and comeptent members on this forum who can help you, just ask.