What do you think?

[Immersion]

can u c&c this
its my first time using this style and its very hard with a mouse, well harder

dont ask me why i made a pear. Well please tell me what you like if you like it. Why you like or dont like and anything else you might want to say.

 

[tzmartin]

Sweet. Look impressionistic.

 

[Immersion]

thanks :hehe:

 

[angele803]

I think it looks great. Better than I could do! I wonder...what if you try to add a curved shadow in the area I pointed to in this image...

I think putting some shadowing right there might make it look more rounded. What do you think?

 

[allabout42]

Very Nice IMO! I like it! How did you do that?

 

[cooljeba]

Nice work but I think the shadow part is a bit over done. Otherwise it looks really cute.

..:: peace ::..
Jeba

 

[munkyonline.co.uk]

I think it looks very good! I'd love to learn to create something that good. I really like the shading on it and how well you've placed the highlights. The only thing i'm not sure about is the dark line. It looks too strong to me. That part is very hard to get right on rounded shapes - still got to get the hang of it myself. Did you create that with PS?

 

[.:Mammoth261:.]

Really nice although it does seem a little flat, like above try to make it look a little more rounded.

 

[Immersion]

ok, thanks for the suggestions
and yes i did do it in photoshop

I will try to lighten the other shadow and add more shadon to make the bumpy round thing a pear has. I havent see a pear in about a year ..

ok ill post back if i can make the chances.

Thanks

ok i tried to lighten the shadow

 

[munkyonline.co.uk]

I think the problem is that you have a highlight on the bottom of the pear when that should be a shadow. The curved line should then be a highlight. At the moment it looks more like a groove than a rounded part of the pear. If you think about it the light is either coming from the top right or from underneath but maybe i'm just being too technical?!

 

[Immersion]

lol your being to technical, there is more than one light source :hehe:

 

[munkyonline.co.uk]

Ah! Didn't think of that lol. I think you should leave it as is then. Whenever I do something arty I always spend hours changing bits when it looked fine in the first place!

 

[Immersion]

lol, i really like this new style so i might do some more. I might also get a graphics tablet might help alot.

 

[.:Mammoth261:.]

Heh my graphics Tablet isnt great (it jumps about every where when using the pen). I want to learn how to do that lol seems cool but i always try something too difficult for me. <_<

 

[Immersion]

well i hope to get a more expenive one that doesnt :hehe:
try and make a pear similar to mine. To practice you could always copy it i dont mind

 

[khuldun]

LOVELY, actually i thought it was a picture posted and i was looking for any editing on the picture !! Great work!!

 

[.:Mammoth261:.]

Immersion thanks mate, i might try, depends what time i gets now :p Cheers and great work once again.

 

[Immersion]

yeah thanks, anytime.

great to hear the nice comments

ok ignore the pear again, its the same one i jsut did an icon type thing on the same page. Just something you might want to start off doing.

 

[Alex222]

not bad. but its a lack of quality in total seems fine but if to look close, need to work out a little bit more.

 

[Immersion]

it wasnt mean to be a perfect gradient. If it was meant to be then i would of used the gradient tool. Its meant to be like that.