Reviw my $250 Service and Website Please!

[sorpeman]

My service site is located at

http://no_url_shorteners/yrsquu

I am offering $250 web development.

Let me know your thoughts.

Thanks,
Sorpeman

 

[kemjika11]

Nice and neat. I like it.

 

[sorpeman]

Nice and neat. I like it.

Thanks a lot

 

[WORDSWORTH]

I like the design of the site but the copy could be improved IMO. This extract, for example, makes no sense to me:

"With an immense domain knowledge and experience in online marketing, we have transformed ourselves into the foremost provider of quality, cost effective web development solution provider."

Hope this helps

Matt.

 

[Michael]

On your portfolio you have "Vication Rentals". I would agree that you need to work on the copy, it seems like it was written by someone whose native language is not English.

 

[sorpeman]

OK...

i will work on my copy....

any other ideas?