Review Wanted

[thetzfreak]

Hey Guys

I want to start my own general bumper sticker business. I have a template ready (just the basic layout). I just want some ideas on how to fix some stuff or make it look better. If its REALLY not good, can you refer me to a good web designer that does website for cheap?

stickerware.com (more categories will be added, don't worry).

Thanks.

BTW, I know that probably a lot of webmasters are gonna be reading this who probably want my business, so please be fair and not just say: Oh, I can make better ones. Thanks lol.

 

[Nunim]

I can't make better ones :P because I am what some people an artistical spaz, but I am good at business. Anyways... The layout is very simple, slow loading also, the all sky blue backround further lowers the value. How about different colors in the backround or in the boxes. Currently its just a big tealish blue blob with some silver boxes. Just my 2 cents.

 

[dannyls]

Erm... good-tutorials.com is all I can say.

 

[arak]

Rating 2 out of 10

That or head over too www.pixel2life.com hehe its a little too plane. If you were going to go with a plane style then you should have just had tables with dotted lines and just did alot of html, java effects.

I give you 2 star rating out of 10 because honestly this site needs work. It has no feel to it.

 

[mr-x]

Your title graphic is huge (114.04 KB) and slows your page down even on cable.

If you don't know how, have someone with photoshop reduce it for you.

 

[Enchantedragon]

to be honest.. i dont really like , but thats my opinion. Like what nunim said, the sky blue doesnt really give the " business approach" feeling . If it's going to be a bumper sticker business, try adding some enthusiasm into the design, Needs COLOR. And the banner.. i think you need to do some research, and get ideas from other people before puting for own design together. Sorry, jus being honest, the layout of text on the banner is ok, but needs more work done on it. Also, you need a logo, and try to have a color scheme for your business, and stick with it.

Hope this helps, good luck with your business

 

[aretee]

i understand this is only a template...not a final version. But right now it isnt looking very gud im afraid. It does load quite slow, maybe a cartoony, humourous approach is needed for a 'bumper sticker' website. But the layout is gud .... u jus need to make it go together, like i dont think light blue is the right color for the bg, also my font isnt appealing....jus use the force..

 

[se]

the color gives the impression of a beginner....
not business.....

if u want to really pursue this business and go all out...
than i suggest u can another template...diff color...
some more images....and make sure they are small in size

>>www.templatebox.com

 

[thetzfreak]

Thanks for your time guys.

I knew it would't be good from the first place, but I wasn't sure if I was going to get a completely different template. From what u guys have said, I don't think a template like this is going to do. Thanks a lot for your reviews. I think i'm gonna have to get another (a professional eye-grabbing one).

Thanks.

 

[se]

no..probs...u can get templates from here too...

www.deonixdesign.com