Review Parenting Site

[dmday1]

Please review my Journey To Fatherhood site.

It has two uniquely written articles at the moment and more on the way.

 

[trigatch4]

Looks boring and spammy. I read the first couple sentences of an article and found it too painful to continue:

"People say “Mother” when they are asked to give an example for Love. But there is another one good example for the Love, the Father. Why not the people come up with this answer. Do all fathers hate their sons and daughters ?"

However the concept is decent.

 

[dmday1]

Looks boring and spammy. I read the first couple sentences of an article and found it too painful to continue:

"People say “Mother” when they are asked to give an example for Love. But there is another one good example for the Love, the Father. Why not the people come up with this answer. Do all fathers hate their sons and daughters ?"

However the concept is decent.

Thanks. I paid someone to write the article, lol. I didn't check it as much as I should have since I'm pretty tired at the moment. I did just make a few changes to it though, so hopefully that's better.

So what makes it look boring and spammy?

+rep added. Thanks.

 

[semanticflow]

Not So Good...

 

[sirengirl]

I would first like to say something positive in wanting to carve out an unexplored niche. There are many sites about mothers, but fewer sites about fathers. As far as constructive criticism, the content, or articles seem to be written by a non native English speaker. Anyone reading this would be turned off. You may need to pay more for quality articles and content.

Needs development, but I wish you well.

 

[griswold]

I agree with sirengirl, you have a good niche. However, the site leaves a little to be desired. I have a couple young ones at home and don't see anything on here worth reading.

I had to chuckle at this, "an informational site helping men become fathers." One tip, get a girl pregnant. Maybe you should say something like help men become better fathers or something like that.

Keep up the work you have a good niche.