Portfolio of Designs

[J4m!3]

Im trying to build a nice portfolio, so far ive got these four but i need your help. I need idea's for sites(designs) that i can make.
First
Second
This designs header needs changing i know
Third
Proud of this one :P
Fourth
Fifth

So thanks for the help, in advance :P
Jay

 

[JuggernautH]

I like them all, i cant find anything to fix

 

[peter phillips]

I like all except for the second one. There is too much text and not much graphics and due to white color looks plain and simple.

 

[J4m!3]

Thanks for the comments but how can improve from that then?

 

[JYM]

They are all quite nice, however I must agree the second one is not your strongest.. partially because the text size/color/font is all wrong (the text should be larger, the font for the header should actually be easy to read and attractive). The ads on the left should probably be left out of the design to allow the viewer to imagine anything there.

 

[J4m!3]

Cheers, i can never pick the right font

 

[dojo]

third one is indeed very nice

Well all the templates look nice, but i love the third one