Please take a look at my review site.

[eddie69]

Hey I just tring to get this site up an running, posted one review today, just like to know what you guys think, any comments greatly apreciated. This is my first website so keep that in mind www.cashspotter.com

thanks a lot

 

[RobjaFalu]

Looks a little simple and is definately missing colours in my opinon. Even with the red you can incorporate some colour scheme. Might want it to match with your banner because it looks like it is just hanging out there and doesn't really match the site minus the red lettering. Good for a first try though :D

 

[alegend]

its ok for a first website, maybe you should change the text and add a background to the page

 

[Petter]

Not a good banner, get a new one. Get a BG color and it will look OK for a first site IMO

Best of luck :wave:

Petter

 

[GJ]

It is ok but I don't really like it.

 

[eddie69]

ok, thanks for the imput, I think I will definatly change the banner, and add some less kiddy text, i'm not sure about a backround though, it makes it look more cluttered.

 

[PoorDoggie]

Its a great try! You have left things a bit simple and the text is really busy. IMHO I wouldn't stay a second on the page because it looks too busy, and compact.

The images look wrong as well. The background is white, and the images kinda just finish. It looks wrong really!

Text needs to be a little bit more user friendly. Try to keep it all arial, or tahoma. That way it will make the site more user friendly. Also, someone without that font on their computer will only see the default font, which is usually Times New Roman, and that is awful

A heroic first try... and much better than my first try! Keep at it, and I hope you'll get an excellent site!
Tom

Hey I just tring to get this site up an running, posted one review today, just like to know what you guys think, any comments greatly apreciated. This is my first website so keep that in mind http://moneyreviews.topcities.com/

thanks a lot

 

[RTM]

The site is showing as being unavailable (either taken down, or over bandwidth allotment) ... are you doing the re-design ?

Rob

 

[nomis135]

not enough color . :imho:

 

[eddie69]

here is the url to my new host http://moneymakerreview.50webs.com/ my old one went over the bandwith allotment. Anyways I added a ton of content, and changed the banner, but the basic layout is still the same. If you think I should add color, do you have any specific sugestions? Please give me specifics that I can actualy change.

Thanks for all the great comments,
Eddie69 :p

 

[eddie69]

I'm sorry buy what do you mean by join the images, do you mean the logo and the banner ads?

 

[Kamil]

Some simple but logo OK :P

 

[obliquegeek]

To be honest it looks a little cluttered and messy. Need to line up the banner, navigation and the content. It'll make it look a bit more cohesive. Practice make perfect though and we all have to start somewhere. Keep at it.

 

[ammo]

Very busy looking, and a bit simple to tell you the truth, Try uncluttering it a bit and put a bit more effort into the grahics maybe.

 

[artistdbs]

I think it's a great first attempt!

My suggestion... I found it annoying that the links on the menubar on your subpages open in new windows. Any particular reason for that?

I, personally, do that only if the link will take your visitor away from your site, or as an info pop-up. You should allow the navigation to flow smoothly from page to page.

And keep up the good work!

 

[Niek]

Looks ok as you're first site , the text all over the website is to big do , make it quit a bit smaller.It will get more attractive. And that Instand love banner , did you put it there? or is it you're host?? cauze it's annoying.
And it would have been prettier if the piece "money maker review" was in the middle.
G/w

 

[Miyavi]

It looks a bit too cluttered, has no color contrast, and has this annoying advertisement look to it. I can't really explain it...
-But, don't worry - my first website was horrid.
...you're on the right track. Just keep trying to improve, and I'm sure you'll get to where you want to be.

 

[bhyraj]

Simple but simply the best. please manage the space, button colour is over darker. change the banner space one banner in header one banner in footer.

 

[She Unlimited]

A bit too cookie cutter, but it is your first website learn from the pros here an Name Pros...... :]

 

[nomis135]

a little bit too basic.