Please Review....Thanks!

[tonyfloyd]

Hi All.....

Please review Learn Spanish Online

Feedback appreciated....

Thanks!
Tony

 

[turner10]

Im getting an Internal Service Error when i open the link.

nevermind it works now

Great domain name! Looks good. Great logo. Only thing i did not like was theres alot of white backround. Maybe change the color of the sidebars.

 

[tonyfloyd]

Thanks Turner......

make the sidebars background a different color?.....or change the colors of the sidebar links?

 

[turner10]

I would just change the backround color. Even if its just a lite gray. Just somthing to define the different areas better.

 

[jido]

Good layout.
If it was my site I would put only the first 2 or 3 paragraphs on the landing page and the rest on a separate page. Then make the font bigger and with a non-white background.

There should be a link to get directly to the Tips on learning Spanish, that is the most valuable part of the site. Be sure to have good advertising to go with it.

Do not use words like "arrogant", do you think anyone wants to hear that of them selves?

Good luck!

 

[Richard]

I love the simplicity and colors of the layout. In my honest opinion, I feel the advertisements take focus away from the main content and navigational list items.

Good luck.

 

[tonyfloyd]

thanks everybody.....i added color background to the adsense in the sidebars.....how does that look?....

tony

 

[tonyfloyd]

any other feedback?

thanks
tony

 

[jido]

thanks everybody.....i added color background to the adsense in the sidebars.....how does that look?....

tony

Well, it's a start... Your site is good looking.

 

[tonyfloyd]

thanks jido!....

any other feedback?...any other changes i should make?

tony

 

[ivoy]

I would bring the actual product to the center of attention and make the links to it look less like ad banners and advertisment.

Overall, I like the simplicity of the design, but maybe adding a few more pages wouldn't hurt?

Good luck!

 

[unholy1]

Nice looking wordpress site Tony.

Layout is clean and presentable. I'd be a little more conspicuous about the CB ads though and also perhaps embed text links into the content to link to your inner pages.

 

[tonyfloyd]

Thanks ivoy!
Thanks unholy1!

will make some minor tweaks......

thanks again!

tony

 

[doZer24]

Awesome logo and domain name! A few things I would do would be to justify the main text down the center. Also add in some images on either side to add a little bit of color to it.

Great work so far!

 

[Red Rock]

Tony,
That is a killer site.
I am very new to creating site's, so I can't critique about wordpress,
or ad placement, or anything technical.
I am still trying my hardest to even get my first site going!
LOL,
But I CAN tell you this.
I really like it alot.
It looks very easy to understand, and navigate,
and not too busy!
And MOST importantly, the whole concept of the site...
Awesome!
I will def. bookmark this site, for my own personal use.
Very useful info.
I'll prob. go back n forth to your site,
once I learn how to get my own going.
Impressive!
my 2 cents!
L8R,
Red Rock!

 

[tonyfloyd]

Thanks doZer24!.....Thanks RedRock!

Appreciate your comments!

Any other feedback?

Tony

 

[turner10]

Looks Great Tony.

 

[tonyfloyd]

thanks turner!......now the hard part....getting alot of traffic to start flowing in!!....

 

[unholy1]

now the hard part....getting alot of traffic to start flowing in!!....

Traffic's easy...it's converting the traffic thats hard. :p

 

[tonyfloyd]

Hey Harold...

How are u man?.....traffic's easy?...how?...by buying it?...or natural via SEO...which is not so easy?

Tony