please review my site:Honda Motorcycle Accessories

[euwern]

Hi all,

please give some comment on my newly made store.

Honda Motorcycle Accessories

i need some feed back on how to improve my site.

i also need some tip on how to increase the traffic of my site

Thx

 

[holeinone]

For starters the domain is very long despite the keywords > 20 letters. The Header design is amateurish and I suggest a professional logo design.

 

[euwern]

yea i agree with you that my domain name "Honda Motorcycle Accessories" is kinda long. But the funny thing is Estibot appraised it for a pretty high value.. Is it a flaw in the system or something ?

You mentioned that the banner is kinda amateurish .. where should i improve on ? resolution ? or the picture itself ? Where can i find good picture for banner ?

Thank you very much for taking your time to review and reply

 

[holeinone]

You can buy stock photos at istockphoto.com. Or better still start a design contest in the design contests forum on namepros. If you are serious about a online store, I suggest a good Design as the first thing to care of.

 

[mav]

the length of the domain has already been mentioned so i won't go there. however, i have to agree the header is somewhat amatuerish in regards to quality. perhaps a custom logo, or a fresh header with crisp pictures will make the site more pleasing to the eye.

good luck.

 

[euwern]

Hi guys.. i design another banner for my site.. and have added some changes.. is it better now ?

Beside design is there anything to add on to my store so that it can drive more traffic ?

Thx in advance

 

[mav]

the header still looks pixelated. the new images are nice, however the text is boring in my opinion and crowded. perhaps a different color on the text as well, black is sort of dull.

 

[barefoottech]

The use of correct grammar, spelling is needed .
The article on the usage of the center stand for example has several errors.

 

[holeinone]

the header still looks pixelated. the new images are nice, however the text is boring in my opinion and crowded. perhaps a different color on the text as well, black is sort of dull.

Yes the design is better, but still seems amateurish. Three links on the top navi menu lead nowhere. I did find some grammatical errors eg:

I am not an expert, so do most of us

do > are.

 

[euwern]

Yes the design is better, but still seems amateurish. Three links on the top navi menu lead nowhere. I did find some grammatical errors eg: do > are.

Thank you so much for the your detailed reviews.. i will work on my grammars..and fix the error you mentioned

Thanks Barefoottech and mav as well for your comment

Hope to work out on placing a background image for my store this week and at the mean time find someone to fix my grammar error for the articles on my site

 

[shig]

Nice domain name! I happen to disagree with everyone else. I assume you are going to get most of your business online (your not handing out business cards, right?). Your keywords are the most important thing to you. Your keywords are perfect for what you are selling. I'm not sure of the trademark issues involved but don't switch to a shorter name. Your domain describes what you are selling to perfection. This keyword phrase gets thousands of searches a month and they're going to tell you to pick a new domain.... crazy talk If you do plan on doing some door to door sales you can always buy a shorter BRANDABLE domain and do a 301 perm redirect to your keyword domain. Good luck and best wishes!

 

[euwern]

Thank you very much for your positive feed back. i am happy and grateful to receive sincere feed back from you guys. This is my first store and i am trying everything to make it a success. I am working on how to give shoppers information and comfort about shopping motorcycle online.

If there are any ideas on how to improve the traffic and page rank of my site. Please feel free to drop your comment. i really appreciate all your help and is willing to help and guide others once i grasp the idea of how to make a successful store.

 

[AussieDomainer]

I agree that the header definitely needs to be done with a professionally looking logo or better pictures. It also seems quite cluttered with so many pictures on the site, but if integrating a nice logo this would help improve this.

I also see that the domain could be good for going after long tail keywords with your SEO, I haven't done the research but if this keyword is being searched for then you might should stick with it. Otherwise if not then go for a shorter domain.

 

[euwern]

Hi All, i have attached my store layout in this thread. I think by showing my store layout, it will be easier for you guys to describe and comment on my site.

As you can see(based on the picture attachment), my store consist of Main banner, top banner, side banner 1,side banner 2 and bottom banner.

Please give your comment on the banner(in the sense of which banner should be modified or changed).

Thx in advance.

Besides i am wondering what kind of service should provide to attract people to shop at my site. (which links to EBay).

Thx i am working on my grammar now. And my friend is in a process of review and helping me to fixed the grammatical error.

Furthermore, i am also working on promoting my site and building links through joining Motorcycle Forums.

Please do give some comment in how to drive traffic to my site as well.. Really appreciate advice from you guys.

I want to make this store a success by learning effective way of building a store and drive traffic to my site. It is also my wish to teach and share what i know to those who are new.

 

[andreyknure]

At first, website has no professionally designed logo! A horizontal website menu items has different sizes! It is better to redesign it in more professional style! Two blue colored bloks at the top doesn't suit website good! Header image looks inaccurately! And many other graphical mistakes!

 

[euwern]

i have designed my logo.. please go to "Mission and Vision" and check it out.. i had also rearranged my banner.

Hi andreyknure, do you mind attached a suggestion of layout structure in your next post ?Thx my current layout structure is as shown in the attached image from my previous post

 

[holeinone]

Look around the interweb for free logo PSDs, there should be some sites offering them, Just Type in your name and you got yourself a decent logo/banner design. I can see that you try, but it still doesn't look good. Head over to the design contests forums to have a look at some of the logos/headers being designed.

 

[shig]

send me your images I'll hook ya up
pm me if you want
feeling generous...

 

[shig]

I made a couple cleaner headers for you...
http://www.companywebsitedesign.com/temp/01.jpg
http://www.companywebsitedesign.com/temp/02.jpg

bg image that goes behind header...
http://www.companywebsitedesign.com/temp/bg_header.jpg

Just copy to your desktop if your interested in useing them.
or let me know if you need the psd files or you need me to adjust something for you. I wasn't sure the width of the header so I guessed.

~shig

-also not sure what "one brand, many future" means

 

[tech4]

A very nice BAN store.
Hope its not ban by google.

If you intent to offer real content use a blog or wordpress. Otherwise the current settings will do for a BAN store.