Please Review My First Affiliate Site -- +rep For Reviews

[nscdn]

Hello All,

This is my first attempt at creating an affiliate site. Please take a look and give me some feedback on all area's (design, content, etc...)

Here is the site Use WhyPark .

After it is reviewed and tweaked it will be moved to usewhypark.com...

Thanks A-Lot!
nscdn

 

[Porte]

Very simple and that is very nice!
My comments will be about text formatting/color. I suggest using a lighter color in the top-left part where it says "Use WhyPark!" it is fine, but perhaps needs a touch lighter..

My second comment will be about the links in the main introduction

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They are a bit dark.. what about adding some light and/or making the Sign up now colorful.. or bold.. in general adding some formatting to the links, because they are important. and visitors must see them clearly. I can see them, although they are dark a bit.

We go to the question Are you still using traditional domain parking? Try to make it bold or different than text.. answer.

Last comment, I would try different border color, the border which covers your site contents.. something other than black. Try #666666, #999999, or #333333.

Giving above ideas does not mean your current template is not good, It's decent indeed. But since you ask about feedback, I give it!

 

[Mike]

Yep, what he ^^^^ said.

The design is really a bit on the dark side, which makes the gray font color especially difficult to read at times. Either darken the backdrop to make the font stand out a bit more or lighten the font a bit. Generally, i'd recommend lightening the font.
The rest is not too bad, although i'm missing visuals. Especially on a content driven site, visuals help to lighten the load.
Certainly an interesting way to drive people to whypark and sign up under you...

IB

 

[nscdn]

I went ahead and made some changes, and put it out. I guess I will see how it does and make more changes if needed.

The final sight is located at UseWhyPark.com

Thanks again for your help!

nscdn

 

[Porte]

I went ahead and made some changes, and put it out. I guess I will see how it does and make more changes if needed.

The final sight is located at UseWhyPark.com

Thanks again for your help!

nscdn

The server appears to be down for me. Please confirm.

 

[richkid]

it seems a little to dark for me.

 

[IDN-forum]

good

 

[nscdn]

The server appears to be down for me. Please confirm.

Not sure what happened here, but everything looks OK now...

 

[domainscafe]

Concept is good , Website Degisn is just below ok
I think you have more concentrated in ads ( Aution ads in header , Bidvertiser Ads etc )

IMO overall Concept 7/10 , Website Design 2/10
Concentrate less on Ads

 

[andygen]

For my review the design is normal, should find a designer to improve it

 

[Porte]

The text is much more visible now
Nice imporvement. What about adding your logo/slogan in the header image?

--Note.. the header advertisment took off the site feel a bit. Because it's plain white for me.

Good luck

 

[-NC-]

^^^ I assume the ads are only there because it's on a free host, the one on usewhypark.com does not have any ads

My feedback/suggestions:

- The strapline text at the top should be clickable to something.
"Showing the benefits" "the whypark parking service"
( er, should it be called a parking service? after all, the main message is that whypark is better than parking, should it be called a content service? web site service? whypark seem to refer to the "web sites")

- The top ten reasons should all click through to a detail page
e.g. the first one is "More revenue", I would suggest it should click through to a page giving examples of how much more revenue, and how that revenue increase was made.

- Menu positioning
The links you have at the bottom of the main text (content, seo, revenue e.t.c) are essentially a menu, I would put the menu above the main text box, directly under the header image - this is one of the traditional positions for a menu, with good reason.

- Header image
On my screen, this appears to be fuzzy and low quality. As others have said, it's also empty, perhaps the header strap line should float over it, bolded, and in a larger font size (and clickable! at the very least to return to the homepage! )

- File names
index3.html e.t.c is a wasted SEO opportunity. Rename them to something short, meaningful, keyword rich. e.g. "seo-ranking-benefits.html"

Everything very much :imho hopefully there's something useful in there for you.

 

[Mylore]

The most noticeable aspect of the whole design are the advertisements, which instantly make your website seem far less professional (especially since they're advertising amateur porn, and in no classy way). Your audience may think your offer is less legitimate, since the prominent ads make it look like you're just out to make a quick buck.

The design itself is a little dark, but the layout is very nice. There are good reasons to avoid graphic-heavy pages, but your website could use a little more of it. There are plenty of stock photos floating around depicting white-collar professionals at work, and these might make your website seem like it has more to offer.

 

[nscdn]

I was not aware of the adverts! That was a free hosting site (that was not supposed to have ads) where I was testing the site. The real site, located in my signature should not have any advertisements...

I am now redirecting from the free hosting.

Some great feedback that I need to review and will problably implement.

Thanks All...